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Oct. 19th, 2004 | 06:12 pm
sweet smiles
speaking of innocence lost
delicate lines
misplaced hearts
from one glance
i knew something more
your eyes spoke words
and tales of lore
i smiled just once
enough for you to see
no words spoken
not between you and me
i wait for the chance
to call you mine
i wait for our bodies
and our hearts to intertwine
i see the chance
just give it some time
one day i will be yours
and you will be mine
speaking of innocence lost
delicate lines
misplaced hearts
from one glance
i knew something more
your eyes spoke words
and tales of lore
i smiled just once
enough for you to see
no words spoken
not between you and me
i wait for the chance
to call you mine
i wait for our bodies
and our hearts to intertwine
i see the chance
just give it some time
one day i will be yours
and you will be mine
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__annabelle__
date: Oct. 20th, 2004 01:14 am (UTC)
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visions
date: Oct. 20th, 2004 03:03 am (UTC)
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awwwwwww
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astralscorp_13
date: Oct. 20th, 2004 07:37 am (UTC)
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seductive
love it
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Re: awwwwwww
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visions
date: Oct. 20th, 2004 05:53 pm (UTC)
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bluepixiy
date: Oct. 20th, 2004 12:27 pm (UTC)
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visions
date: Oct. 20th, 2004 05:53 pm (UTC)
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artfullywhole
date: Oct. 20th, 2004 11:22 pm (UTC)
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though I think it would have been presented better had it been a free-verse style
still, it's well written
(:
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visions
date: Oct. 21st, 2004 02:13 am (UTC)
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nicely done!
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black_rainbow87
date: Oct. 21st, 2004 12:17 am (UTC)
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Re: nicely done!
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visions
date: Oct. 21st, 2004 02:14 am (UTC)
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hellloitslate
date: Oct. 21st, 2004 05:56 am (UTC)
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visions
date: Oct. 21st, 2004 06:52 am (UTC)
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no___angel
date: Oct. 21st, 2004 01:11 pm (UTC)
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visions
date: Oct. 21st, 2004 01:55 pm (UTC)
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hmmm...
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be_dazzle_me
date: Oct. 22nd, 2004 11:10 am (UTC)
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Re: hmmm...
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visions
date: Oct. 22nd, 2004 02:59 pm (UTC)
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sweet poem
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one_point_five
date: Oct. 30th, 2004 07:45 pm (UTC)
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Re: sweet poem
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visions
date: Oct. 30th, 2004 08:20 pm (UTC)
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