my dream
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Oct. 8th, 2004 | 11:12 am
once the moon passed
the darkness slid through the heavy sky
trying to find something to grab hold
tearing through its hands
the burns settle like thorns
burying themselves with deep disdain
holding strong
like a silken thread
i grasp
for the life i want
for the dream that slides effortlessly by
i cry as i am forced to let go
releasing myself from the bindings
my own tether
this dream was not meant to be had
the scars
the burns
they are each their own tomb
holding the live and the dead
i settle in slumber
silently waiting for the sun to rise
to bask with renewed vigor
i see nothing that opens my eyes
in the end
i wake up
only to die
the darkness slid through the heavy sky
trying to find something to grab hold
tearing through its hands
the burns settle like thorns
burying themselves with deep disdain
holding strong
like a silken thread
i grasp
for the life i want
for the dream that slides effortlessly by
i cry as i am forced to let go
releasing myself from the bindings
my own tether
this dream was not meant to be had
the scars
the burns
they are each their own tomb
holding the live and the dead
i settle in slumber
silently waiting for the sun to rise
to bask with renewed vigor
i see nothing that opens my eyes
in the end
i wake up
only to die
hehe
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astralscorp_13
date: Oct. 8th, 2004 04:56 pm (UTC)
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Re: hehe
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date: Oct. 8th, 2004 07:13 pm (UTC)
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artfullywhole
date: Oct. 8th, 2004 10:53 pm (UTC)
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That's an interesting description. An enjoyable piece.
Odd, but I like the sense of despair it has.
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visions
date: Oct. 8th, 2004 11:03 pm (UTC)
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gentlerose
date: Oct. 9th, 2004 10:11 am (UTC)
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If I were able to rewrite what I wrote earlier, I would be happy to do it, but it is 6:10 am here, and I have not had a wink of sleep. Perhaps tomorrow, I will say more.
One thing I can tell you, keep writing!
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Re: Happened again!
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date: Oct. 9th, 2004 09:11 pm (UTC)
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nice
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ficklecreature
date: Oct. 9th, 2004 08:29 pm (UTC)
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i hope you continue to enter your poems and stuff, i would really like to see more of your work.
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date: Oct. 9th, 2004 09:11 pm (UTC)
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date: Oct. 11th, 2004 12:29 am (UTC)
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date: Oct. 11th, 2004 05:32 am (UTC)
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_cupcake86
date: Oct. 14th, 2004 04:22 am (UTC)
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I really liked this. I can really relate to how you feel. and you seem cute
love always me
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date: Oct. 14th, 2004 05:40 am (UTC)
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You
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way2gd2btru
date: Oct. 14th, 2004 11:10 pm (UTC)
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I am simply an anonymous voyuer who enjoys reading your thoughts. I feel like i'm somehow guilty for prying into your life without permission, so i thought id announce myself - as the peeping tom that i have become :)
I hope u keep up the writing.
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date: Oct. 15th, 2004 05:37 am (UTC)
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black_rainbow87
date: Oct. 15th, 2004 12:09 pm (UTC)
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keep it up!
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date: Oct. 15th, 2004 02:24 pm (UTC)
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date: Oct. 18th, 2004 07:08 pm (UTC)
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date: Oct. 18th, 2004 08:46 pm (UTC)
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date: Oct. 18th, 2004 08:46 pm (UTC)
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date: Oct. 18th, 2004 09:17 pm (UTC)
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your cute
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date: Oct. 20th, 2004 12:33 pm (UTC)
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Re: your cute
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date: Oct. 20th, 2004 05:53 pm (UTC)
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date: Nov. 5th, 2004 12:12 am (UTC)
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date: Nov. 5th, 2004 04:10 am (UTC)
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your poems are wonderful
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date: Apr. 4th, 2005 12:58 am (UTC)
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date: Apr. 4th, 2005 01:08 am (UTC)
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