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Mar. 9th, 2003 | 06:09 pm

breathe.
take a step.
find me.
i am yours...
yours to keep.

blink.
open your eyes.
hide me.
i am a surprise.

cough.
cover up.
i am not there.
secrets...
in the closet.
fear.

speak.
words that ooze lies.
lead them away.
soothe their ears.
betray their eyes.

a single word...
speaking a thousand pictures.
a single breath...
a muttered lie.

burst out.
i do not care.
i am here to see.
there is no fear.

do not hide me.
do not put me away.
i am here.
for all to see.
i am here.
this is me.

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un giusto mezzo

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from: beetwo
date: Mar. 9th, 2003 05:41 pm (UTC)
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Where do you gey your inspiration?

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from: fishie01
date: Mar. 9th, 2003 08:15 pm (UTC)
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screw inspiration. where did you get that icon ;-)

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from: jemmo
date: Mar. 9th, 2003 05:47 pm (UTC)
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*hugs*

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Beth

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from: magicpostitnote
date: Mar. 9th, 2003 07:17 pm (UTC)
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dude. you rock. i suck at poetry. it's not even an inferiority complex saying my poetry sucks, it's just that when i sit down to write it, nothing comes out. oh well, doesn't stop me from appreciating it now, does it?. and we all have our strengths.

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Annie

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from: purplelephant
date: Mar. 9th, 2003 07:43 pm (UTC)
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simply beautiful :o)

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Leti

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from: lil_miss_leti
date: Mar. 9th, 2003 08:24 pm (UTC)
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you know I was listening to "Cry" by Faith Hill when I read it and it almost made me cry. Good poem, dudesy!

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Mar. 10th, 2003 01:07 pm (UTC)
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the poem almost made you cry or the song did?

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Here comes trouble...

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from: liltrouble222
date: Mar. 10th, 2003 09:33 am (UTC)
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and out of the woodwork there you pop up with the beauty of words.

mmm.

thanks.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Mar. 10th, 2003 01:07 pm (UTC)
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you just like teasing me with that icon.

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Denice Booker

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from: unholyghost
date: Mar. 10th, 2003 03:39 pm (UTC)
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awesome new photo!

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bunny

hiya

from: boobunnyfoo
date: Mar. 11th, 2003 03:06 am (UTC)
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i really like ur poam. love bunnyfoo.x

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from: danmodude
date: Mar. 11th, 2003 07:42 pm (UTC)
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ANYONE WANNA FUCK? IM FOR IT!

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from: aprilfresh
date: Mar. 12th, 2003 05:29 am (UTC)
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jesus.

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Sarah G.

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from: ex_sarahinaj239
date: Mar. 12th, 2003 12:43 pm (UTC)
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I think you're sexy...

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Sarah G.

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from: ex_sarahinaj239
date: Mar. 12th, 2003 01:04 pm (UTC)
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you are making me giggle like a school girl

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Mar. 12th, 2003 02:18 pm (UTC)
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whys that?

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from: butnotlikebarbi
date: Mar. 14th, 2003 02:41 pm (UTC)
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wowie....... too talented with words your are!

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Mar. 14th, 2003 03:19 pm (UTC)
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see my latest post for more. ;)

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Lilith Niteshayde

nice...

from: plushnitemares
date: Apr. 12th, 2003 08:45 pm (UTC)
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great thinkers mind alike...err...yea...anyway...very nice...post more please...

will be posting some of mine soon ;)

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Tim

Re: nice...

from: visions
date: Apr. 13th, 2003 10:41 am (UTC)
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see my memories.

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Jizzle

by mistake

from: latina_caliente
date: Apr. 16th, 2003 05:03 pm (UTC)
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not sure what i did wrong but i ended up in your page... wow! what you wrote is so beautiful and inspiring!

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Tim

Re: by mistake

from: visions
date: Apr. 16th, 2003 08:18 pm (UTC)
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i am glad you like it.

what does it inspire you to do?

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Tim

Re: Very...

from: visions
date: May. 5th, 2003 07:25 pm (UTC)
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far from my first attempt at poetry, but all my poems are unedited. i never rewrite them or change the words once they are typed in (even before completion).

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Nicely done

from: angelbeloved
date: May. 9th, 2003 06:32 pm (UTC)
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Placed this in my memories when I first started at LJ ....

Very nicely done ...Even reading it from bottom to top ...

Angel ~

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Tim

Re: Nicely done

from: visions
date: May. 11th, 2003 12:30 pm (UTC)
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interesting. i dont think that i ever thought to read my poetry backwards. :)

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