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Feb. 5th, 2001 | 03:40 am
mood: crying more

I am free
I am not me
hidden from view
obscured from you

I am me
but I am not free
torn inside
broken down as I cried

I am alive
but I should be dead
shattered soul
broken head

I am dead
I wish I was alive
reaching out
a faster stride

I am broken
fix me please
I am here
begging on my knees

I am fixed
thank you so much
no more tears
but no more touch.

I cant feel
no pain.
I don't cry
no tears ever shed in vain.

I cant love
I'm empty inside
please stop this
please let me cry.

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from: anonymous
date: Feb. 5th, 2001 01:15 pm (UTC)

pleaspleaseplease explain...what happened?

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from: black_rainbow87
date: Sep. 22nd, 2004 06:38 pm (UTC)

i love this poem! it is so deep!you have a beuatiful way with words!

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from: visions
date: Sep. 22nd, 2004 09:57 pm (UTC)


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