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Jan. 23rd, 2001 | 09:41 pm

they are all after me
they watch me when i sleep
the voices
tell me
they scream all night
make me run
make me hide from the screams
hide
before they kill me
i run
fast
but i cant escape
they are after me
they will follow me
no matter where i go
they know where you live
they know where i hide.
the only solution
is to die.

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note: this is just an exercise.

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dreamland

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from: dreamland
date: Jan. 23rd, 2001 08:18 pm (UTC)
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ok, *sigh of relief* just an exercise. i was worried there for a sec. *hugs*

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jan. 23rd, 2001 08:27 pm (UTC)
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*lick*

i wanted to see if i could write a paranoid poem.

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dreamland

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from: dreamland
date: Jan. 23rd, 2001 08:38 pm (UTC)
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sounds like you hit it on the target. sounds very paranoid to me.

argh... like those horror books that i read too much of. ^_^ i love john saul. hehe. *grins* especially picking up one of his books and reading it at night...all alone...*shudders* ^_^ with that poem, you could probably write a horror book better than saul. hehe. =P

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jan. 23rd, 2001 08:41 pm (UTC)
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i think i will write a poem about death next time. :)

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dreamland

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from: dreamland
date: Jan. 23rd, 2001 08:46 pm (UTC)
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death???!! =( argh. that's some pretty intense stuff. *hugs* *sniff*

sigh... the makings of a horror story... =P

hehe. but. ack. we always question death... should just learn to accept it when our time comes, ya? *hugs* cuz so many ppl fear it. argh.

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Kristy

Poems

from: chicagogirl
date: Jan. 24th, 2001 01:07 pm (UTC)
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Write a poem about fear. Like what you fear.
Iam curious what handsome men like you would fear. Do you fear women? Commitment? One Night Stands?

I will be interested in this.

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Tim

Re: Poems

from: visions
date: Jan. 24th, 2001 03:23 pm (UTC)
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okay. i will do so and post it later tonight probably. :)

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Tim

Re: Poems

from: visions
date: Feb. 5th, 2001 12:52 am (UTC)
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it has been written.

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She's alright.

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from: pamcash
date: Jan. 29th, 2001 01:23 pm (UTC)
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don't die!

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jan. 29th, 2001 01:36 pm (UTC)
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hehe. i wont. :)

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