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Dec. 26th, 2005 | 02:03 am

i sense your fear
it slides slowly from your pores
i feel it brush against me
i feel it enter my soul

i see you cross before me
i watch you walk right by
i am scared i will lose you
i am scared you wont even try

i feel you slipping
another man you may find
i am scared of losing you
i am scared i wont get to call you mine

maybe it isnt so
maybe i wont know
at the moment...
i just dont want to let go

it happens so slowly
i can feel your grasp
you holding onto me
telling me it will last

my heart is taken
tight it is held
i feel your eyes watching
i feel your heart beat with mine

everything will be alright
together
one step at a time

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from: alphabetface
date: Dec. 26th, 2005 09:43 am (UTC)
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I like the ending. It leaves a sense of hope.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Dec. 26th, 2005 04:22 pm (UTC)
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i'm glad you like it.

do you write?

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from: alphabetface
date: Dec. 26th, 2005 11:37 pm (UTC)
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I used to, but not anymore

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Dec. 27th, 2005 01:11 am (UTC)
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what made you stop?

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from: alphabetface
date: Dec. 27th, 2005 05:39 am (UTC)
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I had a period of major depression and just couldn't. After that I simply didn't want to. It was something that used to be a passion, and if there's no passion in it, I just don't see the point. There are some occasions in which I'll find inspiration, so I'll write again, but it doesn't happen often.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Dec. 27th, 2005 06:04 am (UTC)
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i write to let things out. passion comes in many forms.

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Kerrie

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from: thisipromiseu03
date: Dec. 30th, 2005 05:50 am (UTC)
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you just made me cry...

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Dec. 30th, 2005 07:26 am (UTC)
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whys that?

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Kerrie

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from: thisipromiseu03
date: Dec. 31st, 2005 04:56 pm (UTC)
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mostly 'cause right now I'm kinda messed up in the head and heart, and I'm losing every thing, and pretty much every person who I've came to love and trust in the last year has completely shit on me and made me feel like I can't trust any one. Plus the love of my life has totally fucked me over.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Dec. 31st, 2005 05:22 pm (UTC)
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sounds like a normal day in dating in this day and age.

sorry to hear you are broken

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susanarsenault

passion comes in many forms....

from: susanarsenault
date: Oct. 25th, 2009 08:35 pm (UTC)
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Your words...
"passion comes in many forms."

This is my thought for the day :) Thank you! I love it!!

I need to figure out how to add u! It's my first day here, and I feel a little blessed to have found your journal. Boy, you just don't know ;) you greatly restore my faith in the goodness of mankind with your kindness & depth. Yayyyy!!

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Annie

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from: purplelephant
date: Dec. 27th, 2005 08:42 pm (UTC)
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i like it. a lot.

such optimism and hope.
how do you hold onto that?

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Dec. 27th, 2005 09:36 pm (UTC)
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one step at a time. i just feel eventually i will find what i want.

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Annie

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from: purplelephant
date: Dec. 28th, 2005 02:16 am (UTC)
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one step at a time and perhaps i'll find my hope again.

i wish you luck. :)

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Dec. 31st, 2005 05:22 pm (UTC)
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you too.

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Denice Booker

hottie

from: unholyghost
date: Jan. 6th, 2006 02:11 am (UTC)
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hottie, hottie, hottie, illinois hot boys...

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Tim

Re: hottie

from: visions
date: Jan. 8th, 2006 06:10 am (UTC)
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well, that was random... thanks though. where did you come from?

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from: cornered_ego
date: Feb. 24th, 2006 01:47 am (UTC)
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i *love* this.

and you've been added.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Feb. 24th, 2006 02:15 am (UTC)
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anything in particular that you liked about it?

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Freelance Vagabond

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from: cornered_ego
date: Feb. 24th, 2006 02:39 am (UTC)
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it's so raw and inviting. i am kind of partial to human emotion, the physical ability to express one's feelings.

it made me blush.

also, i can relate to the message.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Feb. 24th, 2006 03:23 am (UTC)
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i like being inviting. people should feel comfortable reading what i write. :)

why did it make you blush though? flattery?

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