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Jul. 29th, 2005 | 11:00 am

summer
clouds melt
away with dew
running from the
rising sun. fear

not
for you
and i will
make it through.
take hold and promise

to
never
let go.
in the end
it is just you and
I that will walk
from this side to

the
next.
just take
my hand and
I will guide you
all the way home

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Etude

I don't mean to intrude...

from: porterbasieumi
date: Aug. 5th, 2005 04:06 am (UTC)
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...but, i was searching around looking for people who had dancing as an interest, and i found you and saw that you write too. and i was reading your stuff, i hope you don't mind, and it captivated me because i haven't really "bumped into" anyone who wrote quite like you do. or not yet at least. you wrote a lot on the theme of love, a theme which i do not really care to read about (mainly because i I love to feel love, not so much read about it) but the way you wrote on it was intriging. and i see you do it a lot, which i think really great. mind if i friend you? i always ask before i do just because it makes me feel like i'm not totally breaking into the world you've created without your knowing it :} Cheers!

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Tim

Re: I don't mean to intrude...

from: visions
date: Aug. 5th, 2005 05:25 am (UTC)
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yeah, that is fine.

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Tim

Re: I don't mean to intrude...

from: visions
date: Aug. 5th, 2005 05:28 am (UTC)
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sorry, that was short... i am glad you liked what i wrote. what did you find intriguing about it?

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Etude

Re: I don't mean to intrude...

from: porterbasieumi
date: Aug. 6th, 2005 09:53 pm (UTC)
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the color...

it's how i see the world...through color.

and your writings feel mahagony with a lot of deep red in it. and i never read that color really. It's great, a wonderful color. i like it a lot.

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from: peachskitty1
date: Aug. 20th, 2005 12:26 am (UTC)
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this poem means the world to me...


<3

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