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Jul. 14th, 2005 | 11:35 pm

open the gates
and i feel you breathe
like willows whispering
the rustle of leaves

an explosion of color
the sun coming down
crashing into oblivion
the oceans soft sound

the wind tells its tale
a whispered word
ringing so true
yet still going unheard

they roll from my lips
the words of the wind
they scream out loud
they rattle like tin

can you hear them echo?
they bounce from the walls
the sun sets
the words fall to the ground

like a butterfly they can rise
they can be reborn
a beautiful thing
coming from an ugly worm

from one to another
we morph in time
my heart with yours
your hand with mine

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Cris

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from: undecisiveone
date: Jul. 15th, 2005 04:54 am (UTC)
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amazing as always =)

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jul. 15th, 2005 05:18 am (UTC)
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thanks. you always have appreciated my poetry

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Cris

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from: undecisiveone
date: Jul. 15th, 2005 05:50 am (UTC)
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not a problem at all. it is amazing like i said.. you are very gifted .. =)

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from: mellon__collie
date: Jul. 15th, 2005 04:55 am (UTC)
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<3 <3 So pretty.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jul. 15th, 2005 05:18 am (UTC)
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it pales in comparison to you.

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from: mellon__collie
date: Jul. 15th, 2005 05:24 am (UTC)
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:) you are too nice to me.

Except for when you make fun of my accent....which, by the way, is non-existent.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jul. 15th, 2005 05:29 am (UTC)
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phooooooooouuune

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from: mellon__collie
date: Jul. 15th, 2005 05:31 am (UTC)
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Blah. I refuse to say that word ever again.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jul. 15th, 2005 05:35 am (UTC)
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*smiles* you are so adorably cute when you pout because of your ackkkkk-cent. :)

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from: mellon__collie
date: Jul. 15th, 2005 05:40 am (UTC)
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NO! I don't know what you're talking about. I do not possess an accent of any kind.

I am perfect. Oh God, I'm awesome.

You should do me.

<3 <3

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jul. 15th, 2005 05:44 am (UTC)
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*signs up*

poooooooooo-zessssssssss an accent you do. i shall do you nonetheless.

prepare to be boarded like a pirate taking over some booty.

arghhhhhhh!

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from: mellon__collie
date: Jul. 15th, 2005 05:48 am (UTC)
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You are the master of similes and metaphors.

And apparently comment wars. I must surrender. Because sleep, although very time-consuming, appears to be a necessity.

Truce, perhaps?

Goodnight and such. <3 <3

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jul. 15th, 2005 05:50 am (UTC)
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i shall take all your booty as winnings for my war!... *blink* or something. :)

prepare to be snuggled with.

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from: duckigurl
date: Jul. 15th, 2005 05:15 am (UTC)
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hey I dont know if u wrote that or not but it was great if u did it ur awesome

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jul. 15th, 2005 05:18 am (UTC)
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yes, i wrote it while i was posting

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from: duckigurl
date: Jul. 15th, 2005 05:24 am (UTC)
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ur awesome than u should write one about me lol

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jul. 15th, 2005 05:30 am (UTC)
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i dont even know you.

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from: duckigurl
date: Jul. 15th, 2005 05:32 am (UTC)
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so hmmm my name is Holly and im real great and kind hearted thats all u need to know

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jul. 15th, 2005 05:36 am (UTC)
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sorry, i almost always just write for myself. so when i write for someone else, it means the world.

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from: duckigurl
date: Jul. 15th, 2005 05:38 am (UTC)
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well grab the world...thats good u take it serious when u write for someone else i used to write all the time than lost my inspiration

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jul. 15th, 2005 05:45 am (UTC)
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i find inspiration in my heart. my mind just does me the service of understanding it enough to get it mostly on paper.

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from: duckigurl
date: Jul. 15th, 2005 05:49 am (UTC)
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Even when u talk, it sounds like poetry, I mean that has a genuine compliment, I am still trying to figure out my heart...so no words come together

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jul. 15th, 2005 05:50 am (UTC)
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my heart tells me what to do. i just listen and make sense of it the best i can.

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from: duckigurl
date: Jul. 15th, 2005 05:52 am (UTC)
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My heart and mind fight, I tell everyone follow your heart, but mine loses its way. I wish it was easy to fix, know any remedies

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jul. 15th, 2005 05:54 am (UTC)
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meet someone wonderful and hold on with everything you have.

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from: duckigurl
date: Jul. 15th, 2005 05:56 am (UTC)
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You know I've dated so many people and my last boyfriend I held on to him for 13 months, and than he told me he liked another girl the whole time.....So that kind of screwed up my whole perception on trust and love

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jul. 15th, 2005 06:06 am (UTC)
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sorry to hear that. you will find someone. i hope to some day.

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from: duckigurl
date: Jul. 16th, 2005 10:49 pm (UTC)
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Yeah I guess your right...There are guys I could date but...I'm tired of the same kind of guys over and over ya know? I think I will just wait for the one who can take my breath away just by his smile...

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jul. 16th, 2005 11:47 pm (UTC)
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well, join the club. i am still looking for that special someone as well.

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from: duckigurl
date: Jul. 18th, 2005 05:30 am (UTC)
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Hey I'll join the club do we get T-shirts? We will call it the Preservearnce club... And to ur LJ entry I think its wrong what ever happened to its better to loved and lost than to never of loved at all....Love is a ghost that alot of people talk about but hardly ever get to see. There will be no regret with the "right" person. Everytime u are with someone u can regret it but with each person u learn something new and different. People teach u a lesson whether its through hurt or happiness

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jul. 18th, 2005 06:05 am (UTC)
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but without regret, how will you know you really loved?

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from: duckigurl
date: Jul. 19th, 2005 07:07 pm (UTC)
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But if u regret you are not taking in the lesson that you have learned. You may want to regret but everyone person that walks into your life leaves footprints even if they are the most horrible people in the world you still learn something and you should never regret something you have learned

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jul. 20th, 2005 02:14 am (UTC)
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i was saying regretting the loss of it... not being in it. in other words, if you live every day for the rest of your life regretting losing what you had... maybe then that was really love?

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from: duckigurl
date: Jul. 21st, 2005 06:19 am (UTC)
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Maybe it was really love, but I think if its really meant to me than it will point blank....People screw up but if something is meant to be it will be maybe u just regret not having enough time

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Nikki

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from: nikkiw
date: Jul. 15th, 2005 07:27 am (UTC)
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Beautiful Tim. And though I know it's very personal, it's oddly fitting for me currently...or at least with my current thought process rather than current experience. I don't know if you remember this or not but as I was reading this I was remembering when you read a bunch of your poetry to me. It was great. This is another one that would be amazing read outloud.

Anyway, good night

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jul. 16th, 2005 11:48 pm (UTC)
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it is just a piece of a puzzle. are you still singing?

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Nikki

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from: nikkiw
date: Jul. 17th, 2005 01:12 am (UTC)
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That I am. I actually just got a paid position with the Bach Society of St. Louis which (to pad the ego a bit) technically means I'm now a professional singer. I'll have to send you a recording of something I just did :)

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jul. 18th, 2005 06:05 am (UTC)
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congratulations. you deserve nothing but the best.

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Nikki

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from: nikkiw
date: Jul. 18th, 2005 06:28 am (UTC)
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awww!! Well thank you Tim!

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Zoë

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from: misanthropic42o
date: Sep. 27th, 2005 06:29 am (UTC)
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i read your poems and i feel as if at times i'm mislead thinking you'll say something you don't and then others i'm consumed with such shock that i can relate so well to someone i've only read thoughts of. your words are profound and all that you speak sounds true, or at least like you mean it, and i can relate...

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Sep. 27th, 2005 06:34 am (UTC)
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it seems silly to ever say something you dont mean.

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