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Jul. 14th, 2005 | 11:35 pm

open the gates
and i feel you breathe
like willows whispering
the rustle of leaves

an explosion of color
the sun coming down
crashing into oblivion
the oceans soft sound

the wind tells its tale
a whispered word
ringing so true
yet still going unheard

they roll from my lips
the words of the wind
they scream out loud
they rattle like tin

can you hear them echo?
they bounce from the walls
the sun sets
the words fall to the ground

like a butterfly they can rise
they can be reborn
a beautiful thing
coming from an ugly worm

from one to another
we morph in time
my heart with yours
your hand with mine

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Cris

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from: undecisiveone
date: Jul. 15th, 2005 04:54 am (UTC)
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amazing as always =)

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jul. 15th, 2005 05:18 am (UTC)
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thanks. you always have appreciated my poetry

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Cris

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from: undecisiveone
date: Jul. 15th, 2005 05:50 am (UTC)
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not a problem at all. it is amazing like i said.. you are very gifted .. =)

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from: mellon__collie
date: Jul. 15th, 2005 04:55 am (UTC)
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<3 <3 So pretty.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jul. 15th, 2005 05:18 am (UTC)
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it pales in comparison to you.

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from: mellon__collie
date: Jul. 15th, 2005 05:24 am (UTC)
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:) you are too nice to me.

Except for when you make fun of my accent....which, by the way, is non-existent.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jul. 15th, 2005 05:29 am (UTC)
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phooooooooouuune

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from: duckigurl
date: Jul. 15th, 2005 05:15 am (UTC)
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hey I dont know if u wrote that or not but it was great if u did it ur awesome

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jul. 15th, 2005 05:18 am (UTC)
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yes, i wrote it while i was posting

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from: duckigurl
date: Jul. 15th, 2005 05:24 am (UTC)
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ur awesome than u should write one about me lol

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Nikki

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from: nikkiw
date: Jul. 15th, 2005 07:27 am (UTC)
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Beautiful Tim. And though I know it's very personal, it's oddly fitting for me currently...or at least with my current thought process rather than current experience. I don't know if you remember this or not but as I was reading this I was remembering when you read a bunch of your poetry to me. It was great. This is another one that would be amazing read outloud.

Anyway, good night

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jul. 16th, 2005 11:48 pm (UTC)
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it is just a piece of a puzzle. are you still singing?

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Nikki

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from: nikkiw
date: Jul. 17th, 2005 01:12 am (UTC)
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That I am. I actually just got a paid position with the Bach Society of St. Louis which (to pad the ego a bit) technically means I'm now a professional singer. I'll have to send you a recording of something I just did :)

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Zoë

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from: misanthropic42o
date: Sep. 27th, 2005 06:29 am (UTC)
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i read your poems and i feel as if at times i'm mislead thinking you'll say something you don't and then others i'm consumed with such shock that i can relate so well to someone i've only read thoughts of. your words are profound and all that you speak sounds true, or at least like you mean it, and i can relate...

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Sep. 27th, 2005 06:34 am (UTC)
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it seems silly to ever say something you dont mean.

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