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Nov. 9th, 2004 | 10:09 pm

i close my eyes
and you are there
each moment spent
with nothing to fear

out of the blue
life shines its rays
a new beginning
the start of many days

my heart beats true
each moment, each day
butterflies fluttering
thoughts of you

together we move
forward we go
breaking new ground
forging something new

each day more
feelings grow
our bond stronger
together, me and you.

in my heart
you will always be
my feelings for you
your feelings for me

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a lost soul

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from: rugirl
date: Nov. 10th, 2004 05:05 am (UTC)
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i like it alot

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Nov. 10th, 2004 09:06 am (UTC)
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thanks. how have you been?

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a lost soul

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from: rugirl
date: Nov. 10th, 2004 09:20 pm (UTC)
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overwhelmed with schoolwork to a point of momentary mental insanity.... seems that this week is looking better than the last two did :)
So being optimistic and waiting for the break :D

u?

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Nov. 11th, 2004 04:03 pm (UTC)
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happily taken by a wonderful girl and looking forward to each new day with her. :)

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like

from: geniestar
date: Nov. 10th, 2004 07:40 am (UTC)
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I like this one alot

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Nov. 10th, 2004 09:07 am (UTC)
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thanks

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Heather

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from: bombquita
date: Nov. 10th, 2004 08:27 am (UTC)
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A new woman in your life?

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Nov. 10th, 2004 09:07 am (UTC)
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yes, and she is one to stay i hope.

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Heather

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from: bombquita
date: Nov. 10th, 2004 09:19 pm (UTC)
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I'm happy for you! I hope everything works out the way you want it :)

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Nov. 11th, 2004 04:01 pm (UTC)
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me as well.

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ladywolf21

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from: ladywolf21
date: Nov. 10th, 2004 02:42 pm (UTC)
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Sweet!

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Nov. 10th, 2004 02:47 pm (UTC)
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and fruity?

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ladywolf21

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from: ladywolf21
date: Nov. 10th, 2004 02:51 pm (UTC)
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You are so strange. =) I liked your poem. I have read some of your others. They are good. =) You should have your own book.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Nov. 10th, 2004 02:53 pm (UTC)
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hmm. would you buy it?

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ladywolf21

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from: ladywolf21
date: Nov. 10th, 2004 02:59 pm (UTC)
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Actually, I would. I love poetry. I have had writer's block lately, but it is nice to read someone elses. Would you happen to have any suggestions for writer's block. It seems like you never get it. =)

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Nov. 10th, 2004 04:08 pm (UTC)
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i just write what i feel. i am a bad example of structured or disciplined authors/poets.

i've been giving the book idea a lot of thought recently. before, i had an offer, but i was asked to select my x favorite poems, and i could not decide which i liked.

perhaps i will give that another go. even if i dont have a publisher or anything like that, i could just do it all on my own and sell the book for enough to cover my costs plus a little extra?

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ladywolf21

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from: ladywolf21
date: Nov. 10th, 2004 04:15 pm (UTC)
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That would be cool. It never hurts to try... It seems like you know enough people to get the sales started. From the comments I have read there are several people who enjoy your poetry. Have you thought of looking for a publisher? Exploring your options? You could send me a list of your favorite poems and maybe I could help with the narrowing down process. =)

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Nov. 10th, 2004 05:13 pm (UTC)
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all of them mean a lot to me, so i cant say i could choose. i would probably just do it theme based...

i dunno.

i had a publisher at one point that wanted me to do the book, but then i didnt want to chose.. so, i dunno.

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ladywolf21

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from: ladywolf21
date: Nov. 10th, 2004 05:19 pm (UTC)
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Hmmm... well I don't blame you. You definitely have a talent for poetry. However, if you enjoy it as a hobby maybe you shouldn't make it a profession or a means to get some extra dough. I'd hate to see you lose interest in it. It does look like it would be a chore to find favorites. You have soooo many poems. They are all great.

Oh, by the way... I added you as a friend. I hope you don't mind. =)

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Nov. 11th, 2004 06:27 pm (UTC)
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i dont mind at all. glad you enjoy my poems. for some of my older work, check http://haveheart.com/

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ladywolf21

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from: ladywolf21
date: Nov. 11th, 2004 07:03 pm (UTC)
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Sweet... I'll do that. =)

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Kerrie

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from: thisipromiseu03
date: Nov. 14th, 2004 03:42 pm (UTC)
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Sounds like some one is in love...

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Nov. 16th, 2004 01:41 am (UTC)
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yeah, i suppose. but turns out there was only one.

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Mistress Lydia

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from: drk_succubus
date: Nov. 15th, 2004 08:30 pm (UTC)
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hmm...you sound rather cute, i think i will go ahead and add you

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Nov. 15th, 2004 10:46 pm (UTC)
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thanks.

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from: one_point_five
date: Dec. 5th, 2004 09:54 pm (UTC)
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aaawwwww i like that one , very nice

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Dec. 5th, 2004 10:02 pm (UTC)
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thanks

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