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Aug. 27th, 2004 | 12:10 am

tears that fall
a pool to float
streams do form
surrounding us like a protective moat

eyes swelled
from moments never forgot
i feel them swirl
tying me like a knot

i wont forget
i promise you that
for years to come
i will remember the time we spent

forget me not
we had so much
so many dreams
so close to the touch

we were almost there
it was within our grasp
i'm sorry we didn't make it
i'm sorry
that it didn't last

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a lost soul

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from: rugirl
date: Aug. 27th, 2004 02:04 pm (UTC)
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awww... that's so pretty...

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Heather

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from: bombquita
date: Aug. 27th, 2004 09:09 pm (UTC)
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that is soo beautiful!

I think that almost everyone that reads that will be able to relate to it.....

you have such a gift!

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Aug. 28th, 2004 12:04 am (UTC)
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thanks. how are you doing these days?

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Heather

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from: bombquita
date: Sep. 15th, 2004 06:30 pm (UTC)
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I guess its kind of a weird time.....doing teh whole "dating" scene and I'm not liking it too much! Too many games being played.

Maybe you know what I'm talking about?

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Sep. 15th, 2004 07:13 pm (UTC)
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i do. being single and all.

how's the dating scene going for you?

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Heather

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from: bombquita
date: Sep. 15th, 2004 07:16 pm (UTC)
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Not good at all! I mean its happening but I'm not liking all the bs that comes along w/ it. I didn't realize what a different world this all is.

How are you holding up?

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from: flutterbigirly
date: Aug. 27th, 2004 11:33 pm (UTC)
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you are fat

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from: kem0
date: Aug. 28th, 2004 06:00 am (UTC)
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that wasn't Carlyn =\

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Aug. 28th, 2004 07:20 am (UTC)
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okay.

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i need help

from: almost_punk
date: Aug. 28th, 2004 03:40 pm (UTC)
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could u please help me i want to change the background of my journal to a picture of blink 182 how do i do it?

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alisonking88

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from: alisonking88
date: Aug. 29th, 2004 07:49 pm (UTC)
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awww, that's kinda sad. makes me think of my lost love.. :'(

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Aug. 29th, 2004 08:19 pm (UTC)
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i'm sorry. how lost?

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alisonking88

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from: alisonking88
date: Aug. 29th, 2004 08:52 pm (UTC)
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umm well... we went out for 9 months, broke up because of distance and a few complicated situations. we've been apart for a year and a half now, but we still talk and if things get better, we might possibly get back together?

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Aug. 29th, 2004 08:57 pm (UTC)
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at least it has hope. i wish you the best with it.

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alisonking88

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from: alisonking88
date: Aug. 29th, 2004 09:26 pm (UTC)
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thanks, im guessing you have no hope with yours?

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Aug. 29th, 2004 10:02 pm (UTC)
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not much. sadly.

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alisonking88

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from: alisonking88
date: Aug. 30th, 2004 02:49 am (UTC)
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im adding you

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gentlerose

Enveloping, draws you into the place you try so hard to hide.

from: gentlerose
date: Sep. 13th, 2004 03:08 am (UTC)
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Unfortunately, my love, my life, my heart and soul left with him when he passed Christmas Eve several years ago from major cardiac arrest at the age of 27.

There is never a day I don't think of him, and how different my life might have been. Who knows it may not have worked out in the end, but there is "one" thing I do know deep in my soul and in my being, he is here with me and will be throughout eternity. He was and is my soul mate.

Sorry for just dropping in an leaving a post. It is just that the poem struck my heart, that I had to.

Thank you for such a wonderful thought to end my day with.

gentlerose

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Tim

Re: Enveloping, draws you into the place you try so hard to hide.

from: visions
date: Sep. 13th, 2004 06:10 am (UTC)
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i wish you the best in your journey through life.

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Darkness Imprisoning Me All That I See...

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from: the_ax
date: Aug. 30th, 2004 04:33 pm (UTC)
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have you abandoned the visions lj client? If so please dont it was and still is the best client out there the rest of them SUCK!

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Beautiful poetry

from: flamingheart1
date: Sep. 4th, 2004 06:41 am (UTC)
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I haven't written in my journal yet. I just created my account. On to what I really wanted to say, your poetry is amazing. It really moved me. I hope to be able to share my writings in the way that you have.

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Tim

Re: Beautiful poetry

from: visions
date: Sep. 4th, 2004 07:45 am (UTC)
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thanks. i am glad you liked it.

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play_no_games

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from: play_no_games
date: Sep. 4th, 2004 01:49 pm (UTC)
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your poetry is sweet...i wish i could write like that :/

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Sep. 4th, 2004 05:23 pm (UTC)
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thanks. all you have to do is write what you truly feel. there is always beauty in that.

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from: berettaluvz26
date: Sep. 6th, 2004 08:34 am (UTC)
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wow, great poem.. really moving. do you need a hug?

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Sep. 6th, 2004 09:30 pm (UTC)
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sure. why not?

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here's your hug...

from: berettaluvz26
date: Sep. 6th, 2004 11:48 pm (UTC)
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put your left hand on your right shoulder and right hand on your left shoulder. squeeze really tight. that's a hug from me!

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Tim

Re: here's your hug...

from: visions
date: Sep. 7th, 2004 12:38 am (UTC)
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that is me hugging myself though.

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Re: here's your hug...

from: berettaluvz26
date: Sep. 7th, 2004 12:42 am (UTC)
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yeah, but you pretend like it's from me... you obviously have a great imagination, use it!

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Tim

Re: here's your hug...

from: visions
date: Sep. 7th, 2004 12:46 am (UTC)
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but real hugs are better. i have imagined enough in my time.


thanks anyways

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Re: here's your hug...

from: berettaluvz26
date: Sep. 8th, 2004 06:20 am (UTC)
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awww, now i feel bad!!!! where do you live, i'll come deliver one!

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Tim

Re: here's your hug...

from: visions
date: Sep. 9th, 2004 01:47 am (UTC)
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umm. i dont know you..

but i live in illinois. champaign to be exact.

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Re: here's your hug...

from: berettaluvz26
date: Sep. 9th, 2004 06:42 am (UTC)
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lol... who says you need to know someone to accept a hug from them? and i'm not too far from you, just a couple hours north in sterling

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from: alpha
date: Sep. 7th, 2004 09:33 am (UTC)
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Random note: I've probably looked at the page 100 times, but I never realized that you, my community's community maintainer, authored your own LJ client software. So, just wanted to share my newfound appreciation of you.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Sep. 7th, 2004 02:04 pm (UTC)
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haha. thanks.

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Great poem!

from: loveisasong
date: Sep. 15th, 2004 05:17 pm (UTC)
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I think that you are a wonderful poet. Ha! I want to start a band... maybe you could write our lyrics. ;) Hey.... It's a thought. :)
luvs,
Me

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Tim

Re: Great poem!

from: visions
date: Sep. 15th, 2004 07:13 pm (UTC)
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what kind of band?

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Re: Great poem!

from: loveisasong
date: Sep. 15th, 2004 07:54 pm (UTC)
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Alternative. A lot like Evanesence. A little emo ya know?
luvs,
Me

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Tim

Re: Great poem!

from: visions
date: Sep. 15th, 2004 08:36 pm (UTC)
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i like evanescence. :)

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Re: Great poem!

from: loveisasong
date: Sep. 15th, 2004 10:50 pm (UTC)
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LOL!!! Yea I think that Amy Lee has a great voice and I like to think I sound like her. Kind of a classic voice w/ a little edge. yepers!! ;)

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Tim

Re: Great poem!

from: visions
date: Sep. 15th, 2004 11:26 pm (UTC)
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have any mp3's?

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Re: Great poem!

from: loveisasong
date: Sep. 15th, 2004 11:34 pm (UTC)
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No, sry. Why do you want to hear my voice? Sorry stupid question. Hmmm... If i record anything you'll be the first to get it. LOL!! KK??

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Tim

Re: Great poem!

from: visions
date: Sep. 15th, 2004 11:40 pm (UTC)
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k

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Re: Great poem!

from: loveisasong
date: Sep. 16th, 2004 04:41 pm (UTC)
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What do you do for a living?

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Tim

Re: Great poem!

from: visions
date: Sep. 16th, 2004 05:10 pm (UTC)
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lead of research and development for a tech company

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black_rainbow87

i found you

from: black_rainbow87
date: Sep. 21st, 2004 07:57 pm (UTC)
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you don't know me but i came across for journal, not sure how, but i did, and i read this poem and i read some of the poems on your webpage and they are very beautiful! i think that you are an amazing poet! i love your work!

to reply to my comment(if you do) please click on my name and reply in one of my journals, otherwise i will not see what you say, thanks!

P.S. keep up with the poetry!

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scooby_sue

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from: scooby_sue
date: Sep. 29th, 2004 07:23 pm (UTC)
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like your poem! i just randomly found this site so i figured i comment.

sue

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Sep. 29th, 2004 07:44 pm (UTC)
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thanks

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