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Dec. 4th, 2003 | 06:07 pm

random visions of life are cast like stones to the bed of the ocean to sleep for longer than life itself.

visions that danced once, now fall.

forever they shall linger in the depths of lost hopes and desires.

washed away and cast to and fro, forever and a day.

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ZeKe

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from: sublemic
date: Dec. 5th, 2003 01:31 am (UTC)
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:)

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djinn

wowee zowee

from: gynee
date: Dec. 5th, 2003 05:40 am (UTC)
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that was
absolutely
beautiful!

check mine out when you have a sec

i added you on my friends list.

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Tim

Re: wowee zowee

from: visions
date: Dec. 5th, 2003 11:02 am (UTC)
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thanks

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Heather

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from: bombquita
date: Dec. 5th, 2003 10:50 am (UTC)
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wow you are really getting GOOd, not that you weren't good before. I can just see the improvement.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Dec. 5th, 2003 11:02 am (UTC)
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just a different style... perhaps.

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from: etherteeth
date: Dec. 5th, 2003 05:15 pm (UTC)
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Your poetry is the most mind-numbingly vapid, puerlie, and generally awful work that I've read in a long time.

Congratulations.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Dec. 5th, 2003 05:38 pm (UTC)
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that would be puerile.. and thanks. :)

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Jason Michalchek

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from: j2thaday
date: Dec. 8th, 2003 05:29 pm (UTC)
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Hey,
I was just checking out some of your poetry & such. It is beautiful. You seem really cool, & I was hoping to add you as a friend, & hope that you will do the same.
Thanks!
Jason

P.S. You are cute!

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Dec. 8th, 2003 07:57 pm (UTC)
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thanks for the compliments.

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Abbey

Just a lil hint...

from: ebbi_04
date: Dec. 12th, 2003 10:36 pm (UTC)
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Hey i just wanted to let u know that u look pretty hot. I was just wondering where u lived and how old u were. And no i'm not some 13yr old just saying your hot lol. I just hink u look good and i just wanted to talk! Write me if u can, my address is AbBz0486@aol.com. or just hit me back at my journal, EbBi_04. O and by the way, I go to North Georgia College in Helen, Georgia. DOWN SOUTH SOUTHERN GIRL! I love the south!

Hope to hear from you soon,
Abbey ( from DoWn SoUtH GeOrGiA)

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Tim

Re: Just a lil hint...

from: visions
date: Dec. 15th, 2003 05:44 pm (UTC)
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thanks

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Lisa Marie

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from: fieryfaery
date: Dec. 15th, 2003 10:53 am (UTC)
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your words are beautiful.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Dec. 15th, 2003 05:45 pm (UTC)
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thank you

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Laura

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from: thissideofu
date: Dec. 15th, 2003 04:04 pm (UTC)
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hey i'm new to livejournal and figured i would look at random entries but i just wanted to let you know that it's always nice to hear a guy be compassionate about a relationship. as a girl sometimes you lose hope that there are guys out there that care about you. my exboyfriend and i broke up last february and it's been tough trying to trust somebody else or let someone else get to know you or even let go of the fact that you can't put your life on hold hoping that guy you thought was the one will come back to you... i dunno...sometimes you look to other people besides your friends because most of the time you can get the truth. friends sometimes are too nice and keep up your hopes that most of the time are most likely to be shattered. anyways, you can reply to me if you want to. just know that some people envy your talents and compassion and your thoughts. sometimes i can't find my own words to write down and reading someone else's can say it for you....talk to you later ...thissideofu

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Dec. 15th, 2003 05:46 pm (UTC)
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i am glad that you can associate with my words. at the same time, it hurts me to know that you can associate. my words are not always the most uplifting. i hope you find what it is you are looking for. i wish the same for myself. i still have hope.

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from: bluerae
date: Dec. 18th, 2003 08:29 pm (UTC)
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Did you enjoy the food?

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Dec. 18th, 2003 11:45 pm (UTC)
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it was pretty good. did you enjoy seating us? :)

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tiv

hmn..

from: momo_chan17
date: Dec. 19th, 2003 08:29 am (UTC)
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nice poetry..i see you're upset over a broken heart and all. i would tell you things shall get better though i do not know you well enough really as i have only been clicking upon things and happened to show up here. i read a few of your entries, starting with your letter to erika and at the end i was actually hoping that she would accept it, lord knows i would if someone loved me so much. but, for now, i shall say good luck to you in your life and finding happiness, perhaps it was not ment to be, or perhaps she shall realize that you are what she needs. who knows what the future really holds, eh?

anyway, my looking over clients was out of curiousity and i shall not look further because i don't truely know what i would do with one, that and if i do need one i saw you left a link for someone else.

if you're interested you can take a look at my own livejournal if you want but currently its me complaining about being sick O_o;; *sigh* ah well...i would post such things about my love life as you have...but i hardly do that...got my blocks up and all...perhaps similar to the walls you spoke of before..

anyway, perhaps i have wasted enough of your time and i shall stop there...thanks for reading if you did.

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Tim

Re: hmn..

from: visions
date: Dec. 19th, 2003 09:42 am (UTC)
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i have actually moved on from the broken heart and am somewhere in the area of just being happy. however, being lonely despite being surrounded by friends is a notion i do not particularly enjoy. that notion happens to be my current state. i feel emoty, not because she is gone, but because i want to share my life with someone, and family/friends don't really cut it for me.

erika's last words to me were along the lines of the fact that she never loved me and never would. that she was dating someone else and that i do not exist to her anymore. those were words i will never forget, but words that no longer haunt me.

sadly, in this world... love cannot conquer all. sometimes love does not win out in the end. love is just not enough. despite that, i will continue to move forward with life and try to love with all the pieces of my heart taped together from one break or another. in the end, that is all that matters, that we go on. that is the destiny of man anyway, to attempt to always persevere.. to survive.

someday, i hope to have a family and a wife. someday, i hope that i can give my kids the love and consideration that i was often denied in my childhood. someday, i will have someone that feels as complete with me as i feel with them. someday, everything will fall into place and there will be that special person who completes the missing pieces in the big picture.

someday it will, but it wasn't yesterday. perhaps it will be tomorrow. each day that passes, i am one more day closer to that life, that happiness. that is all that matters. life goes on, and the end of my life will be reached regardless of what happens in the meantime. by that point, i will have fulfilled my destiny, be it whatever it may be and my life will be complete as it was meant to be. hopefully.

i thank you for your kind words and i apologize for the verbose reply.

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Darren

:)

from: hisrealm
date: Dec. 20th, 2003 01:35 am (UTC)
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I appreciate what you're going through for I have been in your shoes too. The reason I say I appreciate your situation is you'll become strong because of this. Yes, an eternal fire of anger, sadness, and guilt will be there no matter how small the feeling, but if I could say one thing to pass on a bit of wisdom I would say; Time has more converts than reason. Think about it bro.

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Emily

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from: hermionegsnape
date: Dec. 23rd, 2003 12:40 pm (UTC)
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Hey I was just asking how you updating on Chambana community...

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Dec. 23rd, 2003 12:52 pm (UTC)
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just select it as the journal you want to post to.

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poptart_penguin

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from: poptart_penguin
date: Dec. 27th, 2003 10:16 am (UTC)
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I noticed you like to write. I was wondering if you would like to join my community, _poetic_dreams_? I just recently created it and need members. Please join! You don't necessarily have to post poetry or a story or something. You can post anything you like. How your day went, your feelings, anything.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Dec. 27th, 2003 11:29 am (UTC)
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i am not much of a poet.

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help

from: nisash
date: Dec. 27th, 2003 05:58 pm (UTC)
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umm, hi. I am new at this.Could you please help me download such a format in a different color? Thanks nisash

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Riot Girl

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from: laestrella
date: Dec. 27th, 2003 10:56 pm (UTC)
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Wow. Seriously, wow. You write....wow.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Dec. 28th, 2003 12:56 am (UTC)
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thanks.. i think. :)

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