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Nov. 23rd, 2003 | 04:57 am

each day passes,
with more to come.
moments moving forward
sewing shut what has come undone

i feel everything,
as it comes to bear.
life speaking
no more despair

i see eyes
that close tightly at night
i feel a heartbeat

it's mine.

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from: devilorangel
date: Nov. 23rd, 2003 03:14 am (UTC)
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I just wanted to say that was so simple but so beautiful & touching. I just love that kinda thing... my stuff always seems to end up being so depressing... =/
Take care.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Nov. 23rd, 2003 08:02 am (UTC)
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thanks

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Christina K.

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from: superly
date: Nov. 23rd, 2003 11:38 am (UTC)
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Hey Tim,
That poem tidbit sounds so refreshing and peaceful. I also really liked your version of this: I hate what has become of the things that I held so dearly. I hate that I cannot speak to the one that I wanted to speak to from the moment I met him. I hate that he is not in my life anymore. There is no other way though. so with that, I must live in whatever form that is. I saw that the gender could be switched around to become applicable to me also =) I named it "what is now" and shared it with another friend of mine. BTW, we're something like 76% compatible or something... Have a fun weekend.
~Christina

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Nov. 23rd, 2003 12:53 pm (UTC)
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i sincerely hope you did not take credit for my work.

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Christina K.

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from: superly
date: Nov. 23rd, 2003 01:53 pm (UTC)
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SUPERLY [1:34 PM: Hey Rich,
Here is an interesting little thing, kind of poem like--the he's and him's can be changed to she's and her's and was originally...
I hate what has become of the things that I held so dearly. I hate that I cannot speak to the one that I wanted to speak to from the moment I met him. I hate that he is not in my life anymore. There is no other way though. so with that, I must live in whatever form that is.
Hey Tim, it's Christina, see this is what I told my friend, that it's not own of my personal quotes...
Visions: fair enough
SUPERLY: I have a great amount of respect for writing, especially since I am also a writer and would never want anyone to do it to me either...
SUPERLY: I was paying you a compliment, I didn't mean for you to think I'd deceive others within the same process...
Visions: no worries.
Visions: it's just happened before.
SUPERLY: that's lame, people should try to be creative on their own means
SUPERLY: I'm sorry it's happened before, but it won't with me, I promise. take care Tim =)
~Christina

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Nov. 23rd, 2003 04:56 pm (UTC)
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no need to paste the conversation.

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Christina K.

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from: superly
date: Nov. 23rd, 2003 08:03 pm (UTC)
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I know there was no NEED to post the conversation... However, I'd hate for anyone who reads your concerns about me taking credit for your work--thinking I actually had. I didn't just want the record set straight with you, but with whoever might think the same thing also. I hope you see my point...
~Christina

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jenne

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from: hellloitslate
date: Nov. 23rd, 2003 03:18 am (UTC)
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beautiful as always.
<3

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Nov. 23rd, 2003 12:51 pm (UTC)
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thanks

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from: beastythreat
date: Nov. 23rd, 2003 08:34 am (UTC)
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sounds like a change of pace for a bit...eh?

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Nov. 23rd, 2003 12:53 pm (UTC)
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a change of pace in what way?

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from: beastythreat
date: Nov. 23rd, 2003 07:25 pm (UTC)
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it's positive. the others that i've read, your most recent pieces, have been trying to lift you out of something. seems like you're making progress and helping yourself get out from under your tears.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Nov. 23rd, 2003 10:53 pm (UTC)
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fair enough

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Smoke Damage

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from: smokedamage
date: Nov. 23rd, 2003 09:04 am (UTC)
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welcome back.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Nov. 23rd, 2003 12:54 pm (UTC)
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i didn't go anywhere.. i just didn't post in a while. :)

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Smoke Damage

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from: smokedamage
date: Nov. 23rd, 2003 03:22 pm (UTC)
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you know what i mean. You sound better.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Nov. 23rd, 2003 04:56 pm (UTC)
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i am better.

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Smoke Damage

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from: smokedamage
date: Nov. 23rd, 2003 05:14 pm (UTC)
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and that is good.

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Sugar

Healing

from: sgrsgr
date: Nov. 23rd, 2003 12:26 pm (UTC)
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Beautiful as always, sounds as if the healing has begun. Good to see you back.

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Tim

Re: Healing

from: visions
date: Nov. 23rd, 2003 12:55 pm (UTC)
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healing started long ago. i just got around to writing about it last night before i went to bed...

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Lauren.. One Special Girl

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from: lhsmallfry
date: Nov. 23rd, 2003 03:18 pm (UTC)
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Awesome poem! I am glad to hear you are doing so well and moving on. Good luck and KIT

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Nov. 24th, 2003 06:51 pm (UTC)
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thanks

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Cassie

wow, That is really good.

from: xmzsugarlipzx
date: Nov. 24th, 2003 02:34 pm (UTC)
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You are a great writer, I'm sorry if I offened you by leaving a comment, I'm not sure How I ran accross your journal. Have a good night.

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Tim

Re: wow, That is really good.

from: visions
date: Nov. 24th, 2003 06:51 pm (UTC)
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why would that offend me?

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noneya

poetry

from: mea_anima
date: Nov. 25th, 2003 09:41 pm (UTC)
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would it be strange if I said I thought you were beautiful? I'm envious of your ability to share yourself so easily.

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Tim

Re: poetry

from: visions
date: Nov. 25th, 2003 10:32 pm (UTC)
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not strange at all.

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ZeKe

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from: sublemic
date: Nov. 25th, 2003 09:52 pm (UTC)
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As always, beautiful! Glad to see you're doing better, hun. :) *hugs*

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Nov. 25th, 2003 10:32 pm (UTC)
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thanks

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Earning My Wings Everyday

Just wanted to say Hi =)

from: lady___killer
date: Nov. 26th, 2003 02:35 pm (UTC)
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♥Hey i have seen you around in a alot of my favorite places & i just wanted to say i love your writting.. and i added you if that's ok ? My name is Chelsea. You should check out my journal ..And i have pictures of me on there.And i love to write also..Well anyways ..Maybe we could talk sometime ..TAKE CARE DOLL! ♥Alaways, Chelsea

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Tim

Re: Just wanted to say Hi =)

from: visions
date: Nov. 26th, 2003 02:43 pm (UTC)
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sure. msg me on AIM sometime.

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Earning My Wings Everyday

Re: Just wanted to say Hi =)

from: lady___killer
date: Nov. 26th, 2003 03:03 pm (UTC)
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Ok i added you to my buddy list on aol ..Oh there you are ..You just got online =)

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Earning My Wings Everyday

By the way

from: lady___killer
date: Nov. 26th, 2003 02:55 pm (UTC)
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By the way ! I love your Layout !! I have always wanted mine like this ..Or atleast my friends page like this .It's so clean and perfect. Love it ! Hmm i was reading your comments from all these other women ..I think what it is about you .Your so open and you seem to have a beautiful mind & soul.It seems to come out alot in your writting.And most women don't know how to quit take a man like that .. Most of the time men are rude and care nothing much about anyone but them selfs..And never willing to open up and be human and be beautiful..Well i will shut up now lol.. Talk to you soon .<3 chelsea

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amy the beag

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from: jinsiew02
date: Nov. 27th, 2003 05:02 am (UTC)
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beautiful poem...something positive finally, glad you are feeling better and getting over things..take care!! keep writing :)

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Nov. 27th, 2003 12:28 pm (UTC)
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thanks

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from: rosegogh
date: Nov. 29th, 2003 08:36 am (UTC)
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*
An obscure comment I know, but I am looking for an LJ client to download.
Did I come to the right place ?

hope hope

*

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bite me

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from: cursedearth
date: Nov. 30th, 2003 06:39 am (UTC)
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So simple,but touching.
I have no idea how I found your livejournal.. hmm, anyway, I hope your alright.
Take care chuck.

-vik

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hi

from: jemmo
date: Dec. 2nd, 2003 07:49 pm (UTC)
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i'm in one of those moods where i'm lost so i started reading thru the archives of my journal... and then i looked at the memories posts. 6 of them 5 focused on you. so then i thought i'd say hi. sorry i wasn't around michigan for thanksgiving... i'll be there for christmas eve i think... but not sure for how long. i hope the holiday was pleasant. anyways just wondering how you're doing & stopping to say i miss you. *hugs*
jemmo

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Tim

Re: hi

from: visions
date: Dec. 2nd, 2003 11:57 pm (UTC)
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i miss you too sweetie. *big hugs* you okay?

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