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Oct. 29th, 2003 | 03:00 am

i take two breaths
silent sound
inhale
exhale
no life is found

i take two steps
momentum lost
click
clank
my heart drops

i take two moments
regathering thoughts
this one
that one
yes, those are what will be brought.

i take two.
no more
no less.

i take two.
one for me
one for you

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:: aunty cngel ::

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from: ccg1785
date: Oct. 29th, 2003 01:25 am (UTC)
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thank u :)

now sleep!

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Oct. 29th, 2003 02:10 am (UTC)
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no

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Beki

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from: bekicutsdeepn2u
date: Oct. 29th, 2003 10:23 am (UTC)
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you write beautiful...good job sweetie

<3
Beki...gawd you are gorgeous!! :)

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Oct. 29th, 2003 10:37 am (UTC)
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thanks. and what about dylan?

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from: shadowofdecay
date: Oct. 29th, 2003 10:36 pm (UTC)
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I went to this Download Client page,and it listed you as one of them,and it seems that you are a journal user.I am so confused.Any suggestions on where I can download a client for my journal?

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amy the beag

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from: jinsiew02
date: Oct. 30th, 2003 09:59 pm (UTC)
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haha..that was how i found vision's personal journal as well and got hooked to his writings and poems.. :P try another link:

http://www.livejournal.com/users/lj_win32/

i think that one's for the client..but i ended up using semagic instead. have fun!!

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Sugar

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from: sgrsgr
date: Nov. 3rd, 2003 06:18 am (UTC)
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Another beautiful poem, I am glad to see you writing again. I have always found writing to be therapeutic.

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journals

from: cidness
date: Nov. 9th, 2003 09:25 am (UTC)
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how do i get my journal to look like yours but more girlie?

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~*Amber-licious*~

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from: loboreno311
date: Nov. 17th, 2003 05:12 am (UTC)
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Mind if i add you?

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Nov. 17th, 2003 08:24 am (UTC)
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go for it.

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Xyrella aka Sali

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from: xyrella
date: Nov. 21st, 2003 11:01 am (UTC)
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I got here the way quiete a few people ended up here...I wanted to donwload you client. Managed to find the link.

Stayed a little longer to read your poem, very nice, keep going !

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Nov. 21st, 2003 02:11 pm (UTC)
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thanks

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from: beastythreat
date: Nov. 22nd, 2003 08:24 am (UTC)
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you inspired me and i don't even know you. you don't know even know me. i read a couple of your entries, then i wrote this:

Sometimes you care and can’t see past
You just keep searching for something right
Then things start to blur, time flies fast
You can’t see yourself, only seeing the night.

Pick it all up, put the pieces together
Look in the glass, and wait for it to clear
The one you’ve been looking for forever
Could be staring at you from that mirror.

Another one will come to you, when you come to you
She’s looking for the same thing you are
She’s wondering what’s wrong with her too
You’ll find each other – the future’s not too far.

Remember where you started, so you can get back
Keep it simple, you’re finding yourself
Confidence and perfection aren’t what you lack
We all only lack ourselves

Everyone’s trying to find it, we’ll get there someday
You just keep moving forward, never be still
She’s moving forward, you’ll cross your ways
It’s all a matter of when, and your will.

i don't know if it'll just hurt more or help a little, but i figured that you deserved to read it, since it poured out after i read some of your stuff.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Nov. 22nd, 2003 11:15 am (UTC)
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thank you. i appreciate it.

as for not knowing you, that can always change.. it just takes an introduction.

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from: kayos_shadow
date: Jan. 4th, 2004 09:10 pm (UTC)
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That was excellent...I have a site where you can post that kind of stuff...check it out... http://clix.to/pe

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