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Jun. 27th, 2003 | 12:07 pm

one word
spoken as two
closing the book
breaking me apart from you

shattered like a piece of glass
fragments scattered about

with two words
you destroyed my heart
you broke me to pieces
you figured it out.

i seemed so tough
so hard to break
so strong inside
so stern when seen.

you figured it out.
how to crush it all.
the words echo in my head.

good
bye.

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Ambrosia

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from: kali68
date: Jun. 27th, 2003 10:37 am (UTC)
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Hello,

Had been reading your poetry for awhile now and finally decided to say hello as well as added you, I should have asked first but I acted on impulse.

I do see much passion in your words along with so many other emotions I cannot begin to apply at this moment. ( Mostly because I am exhausted :/ )

I use to write quite a bit myself but had lost my passion until recently. So, hopefully soon I shall begin again.

Keep opening your mind and let the words flow, it is most interesting to read and perhaps crawl into your mind if only for a short time.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jun. 27th, 2003 10:44 am (UTC)
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no worries. i never mind when someone adds me.

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i before e except after d.

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from: plain_mourning
date: Jun. 27th, 2003 02:28 pm (UTC)
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with two words
you destroyed my heart
you broke me to pieces
you figured it out.


*heart stops*.....me likey.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jun. 27th, 2003 04:00 pm (UTC)
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some people think the easiest way to hurt them is to say mean things. for me, it was to be left by the one i love.

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Precious Illusions

wow

from: cdn_angel
date: Jun. 27th, 2003 11:34 pm (UTC)
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Once again you have written an amazing poem.....it bugs me whenever i get crushed.What bothers me even more is when people figure me out......there's no fun in that....always gotta keep the people on their toes....that's what i say.....as always....you are inspiring.....Peace Out....

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Sugar

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from: sgrsgr
date: Jun. 28th, 2003 01:11 am (UTC)
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Beautifully emotional. Those two words are the hardest to say.

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Cris

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from: undecisiveone
date: Jun. 28th, 2003 07:17 am (UTC)
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yet again .. i love your poem .. your words are great..

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Trac

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from: onestepatatime
date: Jun. 30th, 2003 06:52 pm (UTC)
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first off... my deepest apologiezes. i dont comment much on the poems you write. you have an amazing gift, to express your emotins in sucha unique way. i dunno how you find the words to express your passion so well but you do and its amazing.

i wish i could do the same. just with a lj entry i wish i could express everything in ... better words... as in my most recent entry, i wish i could have found different words that convay my mesg more.

please keep writing because its wonderful and i hope you never lose your gift.

.:*hugz*:. <3

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manny got back

nice.

from: manny_got_back
date: Jul. 2nd, 2003 12:27 pm (UTC)
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very nice.

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from: iwillflail
date: Jul. 2nd, 2003 09:02 pm (UTC)
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hi, i like your journal. i'm going to add you, i hope that's okay. <3

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jul. 3rd, 2003 08:02 am (UTC)
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fine with me.

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from: stealthangel
date: Jul. 7th, 2003 01:36 pm (UTC)
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so true

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jul. 7th, 2003 01:52 pm (UTC)
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sadly

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Ayoub™

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from: ayoub
date: Jul. 9th, 2003 04:30 am (UTC)
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Straightforward and powerful

A great poem!

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jul. 9th, 2003 07:07 am (UTC)
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thanks.

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Kristen

pic

from: return2yourself
date: Jul. 13th, 2003 07:45 pm (UTC)
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i'm assuming that's u in the pic.. u're pretty cute! ;-)

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jul. 13th, 2003 10:37 pm (UTC)
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thanks. :)

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Rebecca

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from: rebeccaquate
date: Jul. 14th, 2003 11:13 pm (UTC)
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Yet another random person telling you that I appreciate your poetry. I'm looking forward to reading more, and if you get bored/desperate I have a bunch of poetry on my website. I know the feeling, and it sucks, but at least you get some creative inspiration out of it.

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Baby, you give me butterflies

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from: blackphirerose
date: Jul. 18th, 2003 04:04 am (UTC)
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hm, I could sit here and compliment you 1,000 times on your writing and I'm sure it would never get old. Yet, it seems as if enough people have done tha already. But, I will tell you this..

I came across your journal, yes. But I never expected to read jus one entry and have my heart stop. While finding myself not being able to stop reading. I never thought it would be possible to have my breath taken away so many times in jus a single moment. Everything you write is true, yet sad. I feel like you took the words right from me.. and made them into your own.

I don't expect you to reply and I don't expect you to truly indulge in this.. but all I really want to say is Thank You.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jul. 18th, 2003 07:00 am (UTC)
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you are more than welcome.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jul. 20th, 2003 07:06 pm (UTC)
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nice to meet you. i am Tim and because of your neat house pictures.. you are added as well. :)

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Aurora

just a note

from: verdeojas42
date: Jul. 19th, 2003 12:17 pm (UTC)
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I sort of stumbled upon your journal and I just wanted to say I thought your words are very beautiful

and with this I leave you with my best wishes

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Tim

Re: just a note

from: visions
date: Jul. 20th, 2003 07:08 pm (UTC)
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a michigander. :) where in michigan are you from? i am from the st joe area originally.

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