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Jun. 27th, 2003 | 11:55 am

tears falling,
spinning to the ground
lost.
a forgotten son.

empty barrels,
a drip and a drop.
soon floods rage,
overflowing its spout.

mud puddles form,
no longer brilliant and defined.

a splish.
a splash.
a plip.
a plop.

seeping in,
the ground swellls.
filled with pain,
as my heart melts.

empty inside.
lost and not found.
a sullen man.
an empty shell.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jun. 27th, 2003 10:24 am (UTC)
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every ounce of passion i have right now, disappeared last night.

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Sugar

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from: sgrsgr
date: Jun. 28th, 2003 01:19 am (UTC)
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You will find passion again. You have too much to give, so many wonderful things about you, a spirit like yours will always find passion.
*gives you a shoulder to catch your tears*

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jun. 28th, 2003 01:29 am (UTC)
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with how many tears i shed, you will need a bucket or two.

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Smoke Damage

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from: smokedamage
date: Jun. 28th, 2003 11:25 pm (UTC)
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ooooooooouuuuuuuCH!

/me hands beer

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jun. 29th, 2003 01:26 am (UTC)
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a beer isnt a bad idea.

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Smoke Damage

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from: smokedamage
date: Jun. 29th, 2003 05:09 am (UTC)
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I'm Australian. It's *always* a *good* idea

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Here comes trouble...

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from: liltrouble222
date: Jun. 27th, 2003 12:28 pm (UTC)
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hugz

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jun. 27th, 2003 12:49 pm (UTC)
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thanks.

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Cris

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from: undecisiveone
date: Jun. 28th, 2003 07:18 am (UTC)
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.wow.

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Sheena

that struck close to home

from: destiny_rose
date: Aug. 17th, 2003 12:30 pm (UTC)
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I nearly started crying when I read that, especially the last part
'empty inside.
lost and not found.
a sullen man.
an empty shell.'


(except for me it's a sullen woman) All I've done the past 2 weeks is cry, because I lost my daughter and won't see her again for a long time (her bastard of a father took her to Texas) Anyway that poem has a lot of emotion, and i feel your pain (though yours may be different.)

Don't fret, you will find happiness again, one of these days.

--Sheena

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Tim

Re: that struck close to home

from: visions
date: Aug. 17th, 2003 04:21 pm (UTC)
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i wish you the best in your situation.

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Sheena

Re: that struck close to home

from: destiny_rose
date: Aug. 22nd, 2003 01:23 am (UTC)
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thanks. i'm so bad into depression right now, the only thing I can really concentrate on is getting back with him... just to be with her...

it sucks.

but anything for my daughter, even if it means getting back with the bastard.

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