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May. 20th, 2003 | 04:19 am



i feel pain swelling
deep inside it grows
silently screaming
only i can know

no reason to scream
they wouldnt understand
they cant know the pain
i am a man

loss of something
even when it is bad.
tears swelling
a cry must be had

you dont know
how could you understand?
i havent said why
i am a man.

wait
that is a lie
i am a man
but i do cry

i shed tears in vain...
sometimes
i cry when it rains
or when in pain

i am a man
and i say this loud
i cry
i am proud.

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Sugar

Yes it is ok

from: sgrsgr
date: May. 20th, 2003 02:38 am (UTC)
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You pour out every emotion, even painful ones. Beautiful.

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Tim

Re: Yes it is ok

from: visions
date: May. 20th, 2003 07:42 am (UTC)
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better than keeping them locked inside.

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lolsmite

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from: scarreddreamer
date: May. 20th, 2003 02:48 am (UTC)
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Damned. Awesome. Poem.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: May. 20th, 2003 07:43 am (UTC)
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glad you like it.

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Cris

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from: undecisiveone
date: May. 20th, 2003 02:51 am (UTC)
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your words.. wow. you seriously have this way with words.. simply amazing..

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Tim

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from: visions
date: May. 20th, 2003 07:43 am (UTC)
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thanks.

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ZeKe

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from: sublemic
date: May. 20th, 2003 03:51 am (UTC)
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Wow, that was great. But what's wrong, if somethings wrong?

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Tim

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from: visions
date: May. 20th, 2003 07:44 am (UTC)
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just a facet of life.

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CyberSpikes

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from: cyberspikes
date: May. 20th, 2003 06:38 am (UTC)
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Another beautiful and touching poem. One which touches the heart.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: May. 20th, 2003 07:46 am (UTC)
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thanks

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wow.

from: writergal17
date: May. 20th, 2003 08:51 am (UTC)
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My friend told me about your journal. Your poetry rocks! Keep writing!

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Tim

Re: wow.

from: visions
date: May. 20th, 2003 12:05 pm (UTC)
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who is this friend?

i am spreading by word of mouth. heheh.

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wow...

from: flutterbigirly
date: May. 20th, 2003 09:50 am (UTC)
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you are one of those guys that would have be at hello. ;)

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Tim

Re: wow...

from: visions
date: May. 20th, 2003 12:10 pm (UTC)
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nah, beauty tends to trip me up. i would mumble and probably not be so smooth.

if i wasn't all that attracted to you, i would be a smooth as silk.

funny how that works.

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Sheena

Very well done.

from: destiny_rose
date: May. 20th, 2003 11:46 am (UTC)
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That poem is so touching. I hate it when men think that just because they're men, they can't cry. Very emotional, very beautiful. Very well done. :)

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Tim

Re: Very well done.

from: visions
date: May. 20th, 2003 12:10 pm (UTC)
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"be a man, get your fucking ass up. dont cry like a little baby."

years of it being engrained. it isnt what men think, it is what they are programmed to follow.

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Nicole

wow, just wow.

from: sweetbabe9
date: May. 20th, 2003 02:18 pm (UTC)
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i love reading your writings. i believe guys should cry too. dont bottle up your emotions. although if im with a guy when he cries i end up crying to. its humbling to see a guy cry too.

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Tim

Re: wow, just wow.

from: visions
date: May. 20th, 2003 03:58 pm (UTC)
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an ex of mine once said to me, "you are more a girl than i am" because i can cook, sew, take care of myself, decorate, and show emotion.

silly me for thinking that is okay... or silly her for not thinking it is.

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Chunker Munker

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from: the_athena
date: May. 20th, 2003 03:31 pm (UTC)
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just out of curiosity, is this an old poem, or did you recently write it?

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Tim

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from: visions
date: May. 20th, 2003 03:59 pm (UTC)
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i wrote it as i typed it... which was the same as when it was posted.

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Hmz

from: angelbeloved
date: May. 20th, 2003 03:58 pm (UTC)
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In society we label and we judge, and life goes on....
Little boys grow to be men who are emotionless, and hollow....

I say cry and be free of judges and labels ....

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Tim

Re: Hmz

from: visions
date: May. 29th, 2003 08:28 am (UTC)
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search back in my journal and you will find a piece on labels too. :)

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Daniela

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from: kalani_angel
date: May. 20th, 2003 05:14 pm (UTC)
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when will u stop impressing me...after every poem i'm just more amazed by ur beautiful talent...keep writing...

i so agree with flutterbigirly...with that smile and these words you have me at hello

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Tim

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from: visions
date: May. 21st, 2003 12:04 am (UTC)
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hello.

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Darling Nikki

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from: darlingnikki02
date: May. 21st, 2003 08:56 am (UTC)
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I've made a few men cry. ;)

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Tim

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from: visions
date: May. 29th, 2003 08:28 am (UTC)
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meanie.

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ASHLEY_ _[ but u can call me miss. bell.

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from: pinkcarebear
date: May. 23rd, 2003 02:22 pm (UTC)
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can you explain to me how to get your client so i can download it and use it?

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лялька

sometimes it is ok to cry....

from: laylosha
date: May. 24th, 2003 11:39 pm (UTC)
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It's very natural...you got to let it out of your sistem even though "they" say - men never cry...bunch of lies!:)

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Tim

Re: sometimes it is ok to cry....

from: visions
date: May. 29th, 2003 08:29 am (UTC)
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they say "real" men never cry.

i reply "fuck off". :)

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