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May. 19th, 2003 | 08:33 pm



touch me
i am in need

to feel your touch
but one last time
to feel your pulse
as it races with mine

kiss me
i am in need

to feel your lips
pressed to mine
to nip gently
lower lip, just fine.

take me
i am in need

let me feel your body
as it slides against mine
pull me deeper
take me inside

you
are
mine.

i
am
yours.

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~S.t.é.p.h.a.n.i.e~

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from: stefne2983
date: May. 19th, 2003 07:00 pm (UTC)
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**bites lip**

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Tim

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from: visions
date: May. 20th, 2003 01:44 am (UTC)
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lower lip i hope?

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Lola

i knew it

from: luvvida
date: May. 19th, 2003 07:33 pm (UTC)
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i knew i added you for a reason...mm hmm.

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Tim

Re: i knew it

from: visions
date: May. 20th, 2003 01:45 am (UTC)
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do you mind if i ask the reason?

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783

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from: aem783
date: May. 19th, 2003 07:40 pm (UTC)
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Your poems are simple, yet very deep.
Once again, very intriguing.
I can relate!
Ain't love grand!

~HiL

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Tim

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from: visions
date: May. 20th, 2003 01:46 am (UTC)
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life can be many things.

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Cris

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from: undecisiveone
date: May. 19th, 2003 07:54 pm (UTC)
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again i say .. your poems are simply amazing. wow.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: May. 20th, 2003 01:46 am (UTC)
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much appreciated.

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Mindy

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from: trendy506
date: May. 19th, 2003 08:27 pm (UTC)
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you can take me now :)

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Tim

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from: visions
date: May. 20th, 2003 01:48 am (UTC)
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for ice cream?

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from: jessieluney
date: May. 19th, 2003 08:51 pm (UTC)
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hmm...like I said, they keep me wanting a guy like you. Go read my journal...I was quite inspired by your poems, so I wrote one of my own...hehe

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Tim

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from: visions
date: May. 20th, 2003 01:53 am (UTC)
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are there more guys like me?

i thought i was unique... there are clones?

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Daniela

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from: kalani_angel
date: May. 19th, 2003 10:09 pm (UTC)
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haven't let me down yet...u got a gift for poetry...very nice...

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Tim

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from: visions
date: May. 20th, 2003 01:50 am (UTC)
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thanks. i have an amazing knack for cooking as well.

perhaps i should write a poem about cooking?

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CyberSpikes

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from: cyberspikes
date: May. 20th, 2003 12:05 am (UTC)
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*wibble*

another hottie

*sigh*

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Tim

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from: visions
date: May. 20th, 2003 01:51 am (UTC)
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where? and why the sigh?

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Sugar

sweet

from: sgrsgr
date: May. 20th, 2003 02:41 am (UTC)
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Very nice, Sexy and yet very sweet and romantic. I like it.

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Tim

Re: sweet

from: visions
date: May. 20th, 2003 07:43 am (UTC)
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thanks

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Brandy P.

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from: brandyp
date: May. 20th, 2003 07:00 am (UTC)
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yikes

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Tim

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from: visions
date: May. 20th, 2003 07:47 am (UTC)
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a bad yikes?

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from: suicidecat
date: May. 20th, 2003 07:16 am (UTC)
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Your writing is the reason why I added you to my list (hoping that you don't mind).

Of your other verse which I have read, I liked this poem the most. Wonderful. I love the subtle rhythm to the words.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: May. 20th, 2003 07:48 am (UTC)
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cute coon.

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Charlotte Yeglic

you're great!

from: charbabyum
date: May. 20th, 2003 01:04 pm (UTC)
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your poems seem to fit into anyones life at one time or another...you're a great writer, keep em coming

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Tim

Re: you're great!

from: visions
date: May. 20th, 2003 03:53 pm (UTC)
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thanks

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Nicole

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from: sweetbabe9
date: May. 20th, 2003 02:08 pm (UTC)
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wow. your writing is amazing. in a few words you sum up alot. writing is a window to the soul. wow. hope you dont mind if i had you to my friends.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: May. 20th, 2003 03:57 pm (UTC)
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i dont mind at all.

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S.

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from: siren52684
date: May. 22nd, 2003 05:55 pm (UTC)
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i think i like this one best of all the stuff you've written that i've read/heard/etc.

very nice. has a lovely flow to it.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: May. 23rd, 2003 03:37 pm (UTC)
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i wasn't aware you read my journal anymore. how are you doing?

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Sheila

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from: singer4life
date: May. 28th, 2003 08:39 pm (UTC)
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That was hott and you are hott also a great poet you have a gift with words. I want you to bite me :( well I added you to my friends list because you seem like a cool guy.. hope you don't mind:)

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Tim

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from: visions
date: May. 29th, 2003 05:30 am (UTC)
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haha. that is quite the offer. ;)

where?

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Precious Illusions

Being added

from: cdn_angel
date: May. 30th, 2003 09:51 am (UTC)
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okay dude, i want to add you to my list of friends,partly because i don't have a lot of friends on here but mostly just because I LOVE YOUR POETRY.OUCH!(that ouch is a good thing)lol.If you do mind let me know and i'll take u off.You are absolutely amazing, i know you hear that all the time but i wanted to tell you that.KEEP IT UP! (no pressure at all) lol

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Tim

Re: Being added

from: visions
date: Jun. 2nd, 2003 09:01 am (UTC)
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thanks.. and no, i don't mind at all.

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Angel Beloved

Greedy Indeed ...

from: angelbeloved
date: Jun. 1st, 2003 01:03 pm (UTC)
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If your greedy so am I ...

When will you post more ...

Hm ... ?

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Tim

Re: Greedy Indeed ...

from: visions
date: Jun. 2nd, 2003 09:20 am (UTC)
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when someone or something makes me feel the need to write?

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