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May. 12th, 2003 | 12:29 pm
mood: deviousdevious



open the door.
panties on the floor.
hands roaming.
lips begging for more.

touching.
teasing.
gasps sliding out.
tongue teasing.
you screaming.
moans heard all around.

cant wait.
must go.
bodies hot.
hands drop.
lifting you up
pressed to the wall

entering you slowly
as you gradually fall
dropping down
deeper i go
pressing up
searching for more.

mmm.
so hot.
your body with mine
fingers tracing
mind racing

time flying by

beads of sweat
rolling down your spine
my hands holding
your ass slapping gently,
as i press between your thighs.

feeling you rock
exploding inside
motion slowing
bodies intertwined.

slowly down
feet to the floor
heart slows
body still wants more.

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from: ex_ent
date: May. 12th, 2003 10:32 am (UTC)
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Alrighty then lol

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Tim

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from: visions
date: May. 12th, 2003 10:35 am (UTC)
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;)

alrighty what?

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Now Reading From the Book of Old

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from: herodotusfile
date: May. 12th, 2003 12:58 pm (UTC)
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nice & hot :)

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Tim

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from: visions
date: May. 12th, 2003 04:58 pm (UTC)
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wow. i got a comment out of you on that one. :)

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lolsmite

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from: scarreddreamer
date: May. 12th, 2003 02:47 pm (UTC)
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muy interesante.. muy caliente.. I like.. I added you to my friends list. *L*

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Tim

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from: visions
date: May. 12th, 2003 04:58 pm (UTC)
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multilingual comments are always a plus.

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Mindy

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from: trendy506
date: May. 12th, 2003 03:17 pm (UTC)
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hm.. very ...very nice. You write this very well my friend .. :)

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Tim

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from: visions
date: May. 12th, 2003 04:59 pm (UTC)
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3 very's in the same sentence eh? :)

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ZeKe

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from: sublemic
date: May. 12th, 2003 04:48 pm (UTC)
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mmmh..;)

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Tim

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from: visions
date: May. 12th, 2003 05:02 pm (UTC)
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that make your day better?

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783

hey

from: aem783
date: May. 12th, 2003 07:32 pm (UTC)
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Hey. I got a client from you, I think.
But that poem was very um.... electrifying!
I've added you as a friend.

~*~HiLaRy~*~

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Tim

Re: hey

from: visions
date: May. 12th, 2003 07:59 pm (UTC)
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;)

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Darling Nikki

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from: darlingnikki02
date: May. 13th, 2003 05:29 am (UTC)
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Sounds like someone needs a cold shower! :P

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Tim

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from: visions
date: May. 13th, 2003 09:35 am (UTC)
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why would i want that? brr. warm shower with another person. :-p

much better idea.

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InfoSatyr

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from: dollshead
date: May. 13th, 2003 09:07 pm (UTC)
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makes a girl not sure what temp she is supposed to be, somewhere beween warm and wet and a cold shower.

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Sugar

Another Scorcher

from: sgrsgr
date: May. 14th, 2003 02:15 am (UTC)
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My but you do keep the blood racing!

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Tim

Re: Another Scorcher

from: visions
date: May. 14th, 2003 06:56 pm (UTC)
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;)

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Nice Rythmn

from: angelbeloved
date: May. 14th, 2003 04:26 pm (UTC)
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Intense ....

Angel ~

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Tim

Re: Nice Rythmn

from: visions
date: May. 14th, 2003 06:57 pm (UTC)
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you should see when i am on the dance floor. ;)

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Daniela

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from: kalani_angel
date: May. 14th, 2003 08:18 pm (UTC)
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that was a very hot poem...full of lust...u sound like someone i would be friends with HAHA!...i've added u as a friend...keep the hot poems comin cutie

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Tim

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from: visions
date: May. 14th, 2003 10:59 pm (UTC)
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heh. will do.

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CyberSpikes

WOW

from: cyberspikes
date: May. 15th, 2003 08:15 am (UTC)
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Wow!!! What a poem! Hope you don't mind but after that I've just got to add you to my friends!

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Tim

Re: WOW

from: visions
date: May. 15th, 2003 09:17 pm (UTC)
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i dont mind at all.

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~S.t.é.p.h.a.n.i.e~

Scrump-factor = 1bizillion

from: stefne2983
date: May. 15th, 2003 05:58 pm (UTC)
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hey sexy, great poem...










cold shower commencing in 5,4,3,3,2...1...
feel free to join

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Tim

Re: Scrump-factor = 1bizillion

from: visions
date: May. 15th, 2003 07:49 pm (UTC)
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what is the scrump factor?

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Perfection

from: jessieluney
date: May. 16th, 2003 09:12 pm (UTC)
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Are you perfect? Cause you seem it? Your Damn sexy! Your writing is great! In so many more ways then one. I think every girl that reads that will be turned on by it, and did I mention you were really Sexy, hott, etc...?

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Tim

Re: Perfection

from: visions
date: May. 18th, 2003 05:38 pm (UTC)
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thanks... but i am far from perfect.

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Melissa

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from: whisperofshadow
date: May. 18th, 2003 05:06 pm (UTC)
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Hmm I did a similarity in interests search and you were above a 10 on a scale of what I believe is 1-10. Interesting ;) I just joined this site. I see you don't have time to update much. Nice writings, though. Some of mine will be on soon. I enjoy this place. Going to add you as a friend, hope you don't mind ;x

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Tim

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from: visions
date: May. 18th, 2003 05:42 pm (UTC)
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yay me. :)

and no.. i dont mind at all.

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Brandy P.

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from: brandyp
date: May. 20th, 2003 07:01 am (UTC)
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YIKES

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Tim

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from: visions
date: May. 20th, 2003 07:47 am (UTC)
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a worse yikes?

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Bukalala

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from: xxanti_stylexx
date: May. 20th, 2003 08:32 pm (UTC)
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lol, that's hot.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: May. 21st, 2003 12:08 am (UTC)
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hotter than a habanero pepper?

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Fallen Angel

its hot i likes!!!

from: fallenangel2003
date: May. 24th, 2003 04:35 pm (UTC)
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mmmmmm that was hot I added you btw

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Tim

Re: its hot i likes!!!

from: visions
date: May. 27th, 2003 01:00 pm (UTC)
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thanks :)

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from: butnotlikebarbi
date: May. 25th, 2003 05:27 am (UTC)
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mmmhmmmm....... very hot;) exactly what I need before santa claus comes over....lol

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Tim

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from: visions
date: May. 27th, 2003 01:01 pm (UTC)
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santa claus? why is he coming over? does he not know it is almost june? have you been especially naughty or nice? ;)

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i before e except after d.

getting agitated in my chair

from: plain_mourning
date: May. 27th, 2003 11:47 am (UTC)
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woah. don't ever do that again. ok, well maybe.
may I add you to my friends?

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Tim

Re: getting agitated in my chair

from: visions
date: May. 27th, 2003 01:18 pm (UTC)
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yes you may, and i might add.. you are quite attractive. :)

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Ginni

Its very hot in here.

from: tommysgirl2477
date: Jun. 9th, 2003 06:46 pm (UTC)
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WOWZA!!!! You are very talented. In more then one way from the poem written above ;) May I add you to my friends list?

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Tim

Re: Its very hot in here.

from: visions
date: Jun. 9th, 2003 06:47 pm (UTC)
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thanks, and yeah.. you can.

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infected_sock

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from: _infected_sock_
date: Jun. 20th, 2003 09:55 pm (UTC)
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mmmm erotic. sounds like fun. achieved a great deal of female response. your writing is intense. i've done some myself, but more out of anger than lust, which you have captured. i applaud you. ::tips hat::

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from: frolic
date: Jun. 24th, 2003 02:22 pm (UTC)
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holy shit. i dunno you but damn that poem, or song, or.. whatever. ;D whew. not sure if it's cool with you, but i don't wanna lose your lj, so i've added you. cool?

-liZ

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jun. 24th, 2003 11:20 pm (UTC)
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fine with me.

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Evil Kitt'n

Woo-hoo!

from: luckycharms2000
date: Jun. 28th, 2003 01:42 am (UTC)
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Whoa, this might be just a liiiiitle late, but that poem is awesome. Very much hot and bothered some might say. ;D May I add you?

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Tim

Re: Woo-hoo!

from: visions
date: Jun. 28th, 2003 01:43 am (UTC)
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yes you may.

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MidnightPenguin

mmmmmm

from: midnightpenguin
date: Jul. 3rd, 2003 10:43 pm (UTC)
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You are quite expressive. Hot poem! =0)

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Tim

Re: mmmmmm

from: visions
date: Jul. 4th, 2003 09:36 am (UTC)
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thanks. :)

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