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Feb. 24th, 2003 | 01:29 pm

i speak in words...
that only i can say.
my feelings for you...
speaking louder,
each and every day.

butterflies in my stomach...
a giddy smile across my face.
slightly nervous,
my heart races.

i feel yours beat,
thumping slowly against mine
arms wrapped around...
legs intertwined.

so comfortable inside.
so happy with your hands in mine.
fingers laced...
palms traced.

a single kiss.
a remembrance...
of the tenderness of your lips
and the beauty,
of your heart against mine.

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Precious Bunny

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from: precious_bunny
date: Feb. 24th, 2003 11:44 am (UTC)
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Wow...that is a very powerful poem...i should send you one or two of my own poems.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Feb. 24th, 2003 12:15 pm (UTC)
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post them in your journal. i will check them out sometime.

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Precious Bunny

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from: precious_bunny
date: Feb. 24th, 2003 12:21 pm (UTC)
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i will do that

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from: aprilfresh
date: Feb. 24th, 2003 11:45 am (UTC)
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another good poem by none other than thee adorable tim

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Feb. 24th, 2003 12:16 pm (UTC)
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heheh. you got to see it in advance. :-P

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from: aprilfresh
date: Feb. 24th, 2003 12:43 pm (UTC)
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yay im special

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Feb. 24th, 2003 09:38 pm (UTC)
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that you are.

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from: aprilfresh
date: Feb. 24th, 2003 09:40 pm (UTC)
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aww :D you rule!

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Tina

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from: moonchyld1
date: Feb. 24th, 2003 11:54 am (UTC)
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:::sigh:::

your words made me flash back to a recent experience...

thank you :)

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Feb. 24th, 2003 12:16 pm (UTC)
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hopefully the person it is for will sigh and melt into a puddle of goo ;)

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Tina

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from: moonchyld1
date: Feb. 24th, 2003 12:37 pm (UTC)
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:) i hope so too! i'm sure they will.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Feb. 24th, 2003 09:39 pm (UTC)
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me too. :-\

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Tina

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from: moonchyld1
date: Feb. 24th, 2003 10:51 pm (UTC)
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every girl should be so lucky :)

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from: aprilfresh
date: Feb. 24th, 2003 12:48 pm (UTC)
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she SO will

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Feb. 24th, 2003 09:38 pm (UTC)
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if she ever gets it :-\

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from: krypto76
date: Feb. 24th, 2003 01:43 pm (UTC)
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brillant poetry!!!!!!!!!

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Feb. 24th, 2003 09:39 pm (UTC)
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thanks.

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meh

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from: skichik
date: Feb. 25th, 2003 07:34 am (UTC)
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hi ! ... mind if I add you ? I foudn you on an interest search ! I really like your poetry !

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Sarah

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from: dragonslilbird
date: Feb. 28th, 2003 08:03 am (UTC)
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Pretty poem that you posted on my Birthday! Tee hee. I like it, I like it a lot! :)

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Good stuff

from: aliwonder
date: Mar. 6th, 2003 05:11 pm (UTC)
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Nice writing...I actually was looking peeps up by interests (some people write out their lives!) and you were on the list...name looked familiar...turns out you are a friend of liltrouble...

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sweet

from: wonderingwords
date: Mar. 8th, 2003 09:11 am (UTC)
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dude i dont know how i came across your journal-somewhere in this crazy web i must have made a wrong turn- but your poetry is really (for lack of a better word) nice- i enjoy it. you articulate your self very well, so well infact that i can totally relate to it. -alright im sure this is kinda creepy having a total stranger read your stuff so im gonna peace out the same way i came- just thought id leave some encouragement-

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DoomGurl

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from: doomgurl
date: May. 31st, 2003 09:34 am (UTC)
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beautiful.

certainly have a way with words don't you?

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jun. 2nd, 2003 09:13 am (UTC)
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sometimes.

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fellow poet

from: jest_amused
date: Jul. 24th, 2003 02:31 pm (UTC)
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Happened on your poems. New to live journal. Loved the two lines, 'fingers laced, palms traced'. Nice to see such good work.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jul. 24th, 2003 02:57 pm (UTC)
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thanks

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vikki

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from: reggae
date: Aug. 28th, 2003 01:12 pm (UTC)
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i was reading the poems in your journal and i happened to really admire this one. i feel your words, you write as if you were living my life, the pain, the happiness, i love them all, keep at it ;p

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Aug. 28th, 2003 05:10 pm (UTC)
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thanks

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vikki

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from: reggae
date: Aug. 30th, 2003 11:19 pm (UTC)
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anytime stud

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