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Feb. 13th, 2003 | 09:59 pm

once there was a time
a place in which we walked
comfort was found
no paths were blocked

i could see the end
following the road
i could hold my head high
and just know where to go

where is that road now?
i dont see it anymore
so many paths
so many goals

i feel scared,
having lost my way
where is that path
on which i wanted to stay.

ah.
is this it?

we'll see.
eventually.

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Denice Booker

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from: unholyghost
date: Feb. 13th, 2003 09:11 pm (UTC)
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Choose one path, one goal for the moment...do some yoga and meditate...listen to the silence...listen to the laughing leaves...may there be peace and joy in your heart, soul and mind...ssshhh!

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Hmm

from: angelbeloved
date: May. 15th, 2003 06:16 pm (UTC)
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I read a few of ur poems tonight and this one caught my interest because of its ending.

Angel ~

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Tim

Re: Hmm

from: visions
date: May. 15th, 2003 07:49 pm (UTC)
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oh really? what did you like about it?

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Angel Beloved

Re: Hmm

from: angelbeloved
date: May. 18th, 2003 07:53 am (UTC)
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The word eventually.

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Tim

Re: Hmm

from: visions
date: May. 18th, 2003 05:41 pm (UTC)
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ah.

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poetry

from: yellek
date: May. 21st, 2003 11:24 am (UTC)
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do you read poetry at all?

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Tim

Re: poetry

from: visions
date: May. 21st, 2003 12:11 pm (UTC)
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that i do.

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