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Feb. 6th, 2003 | 02:15 am

if i could tell you
just a single thing
if i could hold your hand
in mine with a ring

if i could see the white picket fence
if i could hold you
even with your defense
if i knew
somehow, it would make sense

but i do not know
so i cannot go
and now i hide
waiting for time to subside

and the pain i feel
is all so real
not knowing where
not truly here

you dont exist
atleast not yet
i am alone
we have not met

i wish i knew
who you were
that mystery part
that other soul

find me please
i promise to be good
hold me tight
tell me it will all be alright

if you cannot
i do not know what i will do
all alone
i fear being without you

but i do not know you
you dont exist
i have not met you
atleast not yet.

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Tina

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from: moonchyld1
date: Feb. 6th, 2003 01:19 am (UTC)
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:) beautiful

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Feb. 6th, 2003 01:31 pm (UTC)
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much appreciated. what did you like about it? anything you didnt like?

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SuperStar

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from: bench
date: Feb. 6th, 2003 01:39 am (UTC)
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Wow!

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Feb. 6th, 2003 01:55 pm (UTC)
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is that a good wow?

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Jodi Podi Puddin` Pie

Wanted To Share Too!

from: jomac
date: Feb. 6th, 2003 06:01 am (UTC)
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Hi.. plz don't think this is rude. Just wanted to share a tad of poetry myself.

The Truth No. 2

if leaving me standing with nothing left to say
was your idea of punishment it worked
if walking away with me crying my eyes out
was your idea of lonely it worked
if watching me crumble cuz your no longer around
was to torture me it worked
if i was suppose to hurt much worse then i do right now
was to make me remember my loss it worked

The pain in your eyes when you found out the truth
the look of disgust when you knew what I had done
For all the excuse I had for my actions
In my own hell I now live

If waking each morning with a hunger for your touch
was to tell me i was wrong it worked
if knowing just how much you hate me right now
was to convict me of my crime it worked
if yearning for your voice to fill my head
was to keep me unfulfilled it worked
if knowing i can never have you back no matter how hard i beg
was to make all things unforgivable it worked

The pain in your eyes when you found out the truth
the look of disgust when you knew what I had done
For all the excuse I had for my actions
In my own hell I now live


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Tim

Re: Wanted To Share Too!

from: visions
date: Feb. 6th, 2003 02:06 pm (UTC)
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is that yours?

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Denice Booker

One of these nights inbetween the dark and the light...

from: unholyghost
date: Feb. 6th, 2003 02:46 pm (UTC)
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...I've been searching for the daughter of the devil himself; I've been searching for an angel in white; I've been looking for a woman who's a little of both, and I can feel her, but she's no where in sight...
One of these nights...

(Excellent poetry, You have a brave, wild heart)

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Tim

Re: One of these nights inbetween the dark and the light...

from: visions
date: Feb. 8th, 2003 09:34 pm (UTC)
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why do you say it is brave and wild?

i would think more tattered and torn, but still trudging along...

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from: gothic_vampire
date: Feb. 6th, 2003 05:28 pm (UTC)
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I loved your poem!! its so close to what i've been feeling lately! thank you so much for sharing it!

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Feb. 6th, 2003 09:04 pm (UTC)
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i am glad you enjoyed it.

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Jell-O Causes Cancer

Help Please

from: roanisnobody
date: Feb. 7th, 2003 07:31 pm (UTC)
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I know that this is kinda off the subject, but I would like to know how to download the client, I can't seem to figure it out. I had this one a while ago, but I got a new computer and now I can't remember how.

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word!

from: 808girl
date: Feb. 8th, 2003 12:31 pm (UTC)
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priceless .. thanks for sharing!

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Tim

Re: word!

from: visions
date: Feb. 8th, 2003 09:35 pm (UTC)
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there are an awful lot of pictures of your dog :)

why do you say it was priceless? what makes it special to you?

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from: jemmo
date: Feb. 9th, 2003 05:33 am (UTC)
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i don't like it. the words express a sentiment beautifully, of course... and i do not presume to know what you are feeling (hell if anything history shows i'm a bad judge of that)... but i can apply it to my life and i relate in my own way which i believe to be the second purpose of art after the artist expressing himself.... but i hate to catch up on livejournal and find myself in tears to read of you being so unhappy, and for that reason i don't like it.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Feb. 10th, 2003 02:14 pm (UTC)
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you can kick it... that might help?

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Annie

:o)

from: purplelephant
date: Feb. 10th, 2003 11:53 am (UTC)
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what a beautifully poignant poem

in fact, i enjoy all your poetry that i've seen here in your journal
you are quite talented in your ability to express your thoughts and feelings into poems

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Tim

Re: :o)

from: visions
date: Feb. 10th, 2003 02:18 pm (UTC)
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thanks. it is actually not quite like that though.. my thoughts and feelings are the poems. what i write, is how i think and how i think is what i write. it is a symbioses of a sort.

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Little Lottie

*sigh*

from: littlelottie
date: Mar. 10th, 2003 10:47 pm (UTC)
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hi just passing through, I liked this poem the best sofar.... It stuck out to me because I'm always telling people how I want the white picket fence thing someday (house, kids, to be a stay at home soccor mom, all that stuff) I really like your poetry because it's simple but deep, and most people can relate. I don't suppose you take requests? ;)

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Tim

Re: *sigh*

from: visions
date: Mar. 10th, 2003 10:51 pm (UTC)
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requests for?

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Brandy P.

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from: brandyp
date: Mar. 23rd, 2003 03:24 pm (UTC)
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that's so sweet. you are one of those romantics who believes there is some fated love out there.

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Stephanie

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from: pimpinnprincess
date: Aug. 17th, 2003 07:28 pm (UTC)
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jus passin thru...i loved ur poem..that and the valentine one.(u showed up havin a same intrest so i looked at ur journal :))

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Aug. 18th, 2003 08:02 am (UTC)
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glad you liked it.

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