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Oct. 3rd, 2002 | 10:02 pm

lighting up the room
a smile is born
finding itself amongst the angst...
pain...
silent mourn.

a reason to frown
her heart cast to the ground
but really...
it shouldn't be that way
not with her.
not this day.

from first glance
she seemed so fun
so energetic
so alive
any heart, she could have won.

today she was hurt
and it shouldnt have happened at all
she is too sweet
too nice
too special to have this happen at all

i wish she could smile
instead of frown.
i wish i could help her
but she is already gone

so now i write this little poem
to say my piece
to make my thoughts form
hopefully soon she will recieve
these words handed to her
these words from me.

smile...
please?

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from: demedulce
date: Oct. 3rd, 2002 08:11 pm (UTC)
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Oh my, you look like someone I used to know.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Oct. 4th, 2002 01:57 am (UTC)
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is that a bad thing?

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from: demedulce
date: Oct. 4th, 2002 01:07 pm (UTC)
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No, but it's scary! Sort of.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Oct. 4th, 2002 02:20 pm (UTC)
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i dont like being scary :(

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from: demedulce
date: Oct. 4th, 2002 02:29 pm (UTC)
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Ay dios mio. YOU'RE not scary, but IT is scary.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Oct. 4th, 2002 02:39 pm (UTC)
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hablas espanol?

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from: demedulce
date: Oct. 4th, 2002 03:03 pm (UTC)
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A little. Not really. I'm a disgrace to my Mexican grandmother.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Oct. 5th, 2002 08:04 pm (UTC)
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hehe. still cute though. :-P

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sunshine and vanilla

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from: her_whispers
date: Oct. 3rd, 2002 11:10 pm (UTC)
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*smiles* i really liked that. thank you for sharing with us (your readers).

M.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Oct. 4th, 2002 01:58 am (UTC)
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why is this the first time you have spoke?

daydreams... mmm...

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sunshine and vanilla

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from: her_whispers
date: Oct. 4th, 2002 12:19 pm (UTC)
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I'm a quiet kind of girl when it comes to commenting. I read all the entries on my friends page (plus random journals), but I usually can't think of anything to say in reply to what's posted. This has landed me in a bit of trouble with people who think I don't read, so I've been trying to comment more here and there. I hope you won't mind that I added you as a friend a little while ago. I found your entries to be intriguing and touching and wonderful to read.

M.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Oct. 4th, 2002 02:21 pm (UTC)
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hence the whispers?

btw, you seemed to have missed my reference. :)

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sunshine and vanilla

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from: her_whispers
date: Oct. 6th, 2002 10:25 am (UTC)
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You got it, hence the whispers.

As for the reference, whatever do you mean? *winks*

M.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Oct. 6th, 2002 11:26 am (UTC)
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more?

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Heather

talent

from: bombquita
date: Oct. 4th, 2002 01:25 am (UTC)
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You write sooo well........

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Tim

Re: talent

from: visions
date: Oct. 4th, 2002 01:59 am (UTC)
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hey honey... how are you? *big hug since i havent seen you in ages*

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*~Jennifer ~*

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from: groovy27chick
date: Oct. 4th, 2002 12:01 pm (UTC)
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do you have a code? if so lemme no..fanks

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=D

from: sexxxymandy
date: Oct. 5th, 2002 08:02 pm (UTC)
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I love you<333

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Oct. 5th, 2002 08:05 pm (UTC)
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hehe. silly girl. i don't fell the love... :-P

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from: sexxxymandy
date: Oct. 5th, 2002 08:08 pm (UTC)
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I'll show you tonight in bed;)!!!

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Oct. 5th, 2002 08:05 pm (UTC)
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*feel* not fell ;)

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from: sexxxymandy
date: Oct. 5th, 2002 08:08 pm (UTC)
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*swoons*

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Awww..

from: deme
date: Dec. 13th, 2002 12:46 pm (UTC)
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Aww.. that was so sweet. But hard to read when I'm going through a sad day.
Where are the other guys that can write poetry?

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