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Jun. 9th, 2002 | 11:15 pm

and silence will speak
the day we meet
the beauty in our hearts
the glimmer in our eyes

no voice heard
for that is your wish
silently i cry
every day i miss

through the sky
you will fly
off to a distant land
physically far away
but never closer at hand

my prayers will travel with you
my heart, you still keep
every mile you go
you take with you, my dreams

i miss our moments with each day that passes
i miss your smile and your precious laughs
i miss your eyes that often kept my gaze
and most of all, i miss our days.

you have asked me to leave
to walk away
and in your absense
the pain grows stronger in every way

i miss our walks
gazing at the stars
i miss the moments,
where i held you tightly in my arms.

i miss the moments, where together we cried
comforting each other
softly saying
it will all be alright

i am standing here now
for one last time
saying up to you,
that i want you as a friend.

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Extra Strength Wanderlust

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from: vaysha
date: Jun. 9th, 2002 09:17 pm (UTC)
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I've really been enjoying your poems.
=)

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jun. 9th, 2002 09:30 pm (UTC)
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i wish they were less painful to write.

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Extra Strength Wanderlust

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from: vaysha
date: Jun. 9th, 2002 09:35 pm (UTC)
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=(
that makes me saad to hear you say that...hopefully they are growing pains, which are no fun when you are having them but once you come out the other side you realize there was a reason for them and you are a better or richer person for having had them.
~hugs~

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jun. 10th, 2002 07:04 am (UTC)
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i can only wish that there is an end.

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Peanut

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from: xmoonxflowerx
date: Jun. 10th, 2002 09:03 pm (UTC)
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meep ^_^

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jun. 10th, 2002 09:16 pm (UTC)
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beep? :-\

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jun. 12th, 2002 09:36 pm (UTC)
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thanks. :)

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InfoSatyr

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from: dollshead
date: Jun. 15th, 2002 09:56 pm (UTC)
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Just wanted to take a moment to say that I just happened across your journal and just wanted to ask if the poetry is yours? If so you have a wonderful gift and the words are punget and ring truth, I for one am impressed. I also noticed you are going to school in Cham-bana, best of luck to you, I had alot of freinds that went there, its a great school, I personally was a Wild Kitty up at Northwestern. Again just wanted to comment that your poetry is amazing, thanks for shedding some beauty into my life

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jun. 16th, 2002 01:14 am (UTC)
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yes, all the poetry is mine. all of them are original works. pretty much every one of them is just typed in as it comes to me and not edited at all. i like it raw and imperfect.

as for chambana.. i still live there, but i graduated over a year ago. i work full time now in the area.

anyway, i am glad you liked the poetry.

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InfoSatyr

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from: dollshead
date: Jun. 16th, 2002 10:45 am (UTC)
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I am one of those people that after I write the poetry just kinda leave it alone, never put up any on LJ becuase most of the people on there are way too critical. You are alot more courageous then I.

Congrats on Graduating, you chose to stay in that area? (Is a die hard Chicagoian that believes anything south of Naperville is southern Illinios and is just corn fields)

So what Poets inspire you and your writtings the most or are you just kinda one of those people that just write for the joy of writting? I know my personal style reflects my passion for Ginsburg.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jun. 16th, 2002 02:07 pm (UTC)
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I had a goodpaying and I thought secure job after graduation, so I bought a house here. Since then, I have changed jobs. I still like the area, but I doubt that I will be here for more than a few more years. Who knows though?

As for my poetic style, I write what I feel or think. It goes to paper exactly as it comes out of my mind. So, if anything, it is just a brain dump. If it is influenced by any particular style, it is inadvertant and subconsciously occurring.

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InfoSatyr

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from: dollshead
date: Jun. 16th, 2002 08:15 pm (UTC)
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Ahhh understandable, yeah I was kinda wondering why anybody would stay in Cham-bana willingly but I guess that makes sense, used to visit my freind Colin down there and go bar hopping and to the movies, but it just never seemed that exciting personally. Then again I live in Seattle now and I am starting to think any place is more exciting then here...

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jun. 16th, 2002 09:41 pm (UTC)
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seattle is a fun place. :)

but, i make chambana fun. :)

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Nikki

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from: nikkiw
date: Jun. 16th, 2002 12:15 am (UTC)
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Hey there Tim. I just wanted to tell you that I can only hope that someday there will be someone that feels for me the way you feel about the one you write about. To be able to experience that in your poetry and your entries makes me feel very good about what could possibly be to come. You have an amazing gift: the gift to put your thoughts, however hard or difficult they may be to feel, into beautiful words. Thank you for sharing them.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jun. 16th, 2002 01:24 am (UTC)
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i just hope that by writing them down, they do some sort of good. my feelings for her got me no where, at least when it mattered. :-\

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Nikki

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from: nikkiw
date: Jun. 16th, 2002 09:34 am (UTC)
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Hey there Tim. I'm really sorry that all of this has hurt you so much. I can hear it in your posts and your responses to them and it makes me wonder why such horrible hurtful things happen to such good people. I wish that there was something insightful that I could say (that hasn't been said already I'm sure) that would help you through this. I guess that all I can offer is the idea that this too shall pass, and let you know that I have a really comfy shoulder and a listening ear if you ever need them. It sounds like she's playing a game that she doesn't realize she's playing. She leads you on and offers her hand and then pulls it away right as you reach to take it. I wish that there was an easy answer, but there really isn't. I hope that this all works out, as I'm sure that it will. Things like this always work out...whether it seems like it's for the best or not. :) Like I said...if you need to talk...

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jun. 16th, 2002 02:03 pm (UTC)
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sometimes things are not so cut and dry. all i can do is continue to move on.

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Beautiful

from: new_jersey_gurl
date: Jun. 22nd, 2002 04:41 pm (UTC)
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That poem is very pretty, did you write that yourself, do write poetry oftern? Its nice. Not many guys I know write poetry. Its awefully sweet, inmy opinion. But poetry is a wonderful way to express ones feelings. Its a good way to let those pent up feeling out, you know?

~Jersey

PS my little bro wants to start a journal, you wouldn't happen to have a code he could use do you? I just thought I'd ask. Never hurts.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jun. 23rd, 2002 04:27 pm (UTC)
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yes, all the poetry here is mine.

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