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May. 8th, 2002 | 10:00 am

with barely an explanation why
the sky opens up
and tears slide by

months of effort
swirls down the drain
pain felt deep
cutting in places that have no name

water leaks from my body
falling slowly down
leaving me here
all alone

but in the end,
it must be right
it's for the best...
right?

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SOUL

yes...correct

from: puresoul1976
date: May. 8th, 2002 09:02 am (UTC)
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if i understand this poetry correctly...
(in addition to a previous entry)
she had enough courage to admit that emotions weren't balanced.
we all deserve as much love as we give to the other....

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from: hummingbird1172
date: May. 8th, 2002 11:28 am (UTC)
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you sound sad! but "better to have lost at love, then never to have loved at all"!! (i tried to convince myself that at one time in my life). true love comes when you least expect it. and reading your juornals i can tell that you are truly an amazing person and have alot to give. (i love reading your poems). i hope everything is going to be ok for you. if you ever want to talk just write me or you can im me. take care.

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