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Mar. 31st, 2002 | 11:57 pm

i walk in the room
visions i see
beauty surrounds
just you and me
silence is heard
a light breeze
follow me now
take my hand please
lead me to the bed
have me on my knees
sit before me
slide to the edge
wrap your legs around me
and lay back to let me please
pull me on top of you
beg me for more
kiss my lips passionately
and slide me inch by inch more
i want to be inside of you
i want to feel whole
i want to touch your soul
i want to hear you moan
give me that glance
the look we both know
take my body
introduce it to your soul

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jenne

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from: hellloitslate
date: Mar. 31st, 2002 10:09 pm (UTC)
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i am in awe. the words are spellbinding.

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Beth

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from: elisafyre
date: Mar. 31st, 2002 11:11 pm (UTC)
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i agree, amazing poem. and yes, it was an interesting night.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Mar. 31st, 2002 11:23 pm (UTC)
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it was written for someone special, with someone in mind. freeverse.

i am glad you like it.

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laur

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from: laurlaur182
date: Apr. 1st, 2002 05:47 am (UTC)
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OMG...that is all..

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Apr. 1st, 2002 07:08 am (UTC)
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like it?

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less than

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from: reasonsunknown
date: Apr. 1st, 2002 04:23 pm (UTC)
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crying

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Apr. 1st, 2002 06:26 pm (UTC)
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why would you cry silly?

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from: sweetaugust
date: Apr. 1st, 2002 06:20 pm (UTC)
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your endings always get me.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Apr. 1st, 2002 06:26 pm (UTC)
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in a bad or a good way?

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sky's on fire again

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from: lil_web
date: Apr. 1st, 2002 11:09 pm (UTC)
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this is interesting. it is out of the norm from most of your poetry. not the style, but the subject.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Apr. 2nd, 2002 12:02 am (UTC)
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not really. read more of my poetry at http://haveheart.com/poetry/

the theme of sex/making love/whatever pops up in a lot of them, just not always explicit.

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Heather

ahhhhh ya

from: bombquita
date: Apr. 3rd, 2002 03:30 pm (UTC)
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damn you make me so horny

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Tim

Re: ahhhhh ya

from: visions
date: Apr. 3rd, 2002 04:40 pm (UTC)
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too bad you dont live here then. it had no effect on the person it was written for.

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My plastic hair is furious!

wow

from: koritsimou
date: Apr. 5th, 2002 09:00 am (UTC)
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my goodness. I got a very *ahem* clear image from that. Lovely. Rarely do men publicly speak with such reverence about that.

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Tim

Re: wow

from: visions
date: Apr. 5th, 2002 09:08 am (UTC)
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an *ahem* clear image is a good thing right? :-)

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