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Mar. 31st, 2002 | 11:57 pm

i walk in the room
visions i see
beauty surrounds
just you and me
silence is heard
a light breeze
follow me now
take my hand please
lead me to the bed
have me on my knees
sit before me
slide to the edge
wrap your legs around me
and lay back to let me please
pull me on top of you
beg me for more
kiss my lips passionately
and slide me inch by inch more
i want to be inside of you
i want to feel whole
i want to touch your soul
i want to hear you moan
give me that glance
the look we both know
take my body
introduce it to your soul

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jenne

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from: hellloitslate
date: Mar. 31st, 2002 10:09 pm (UTC)
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i am in awe. the words are spellbinding.

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Beth

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from: elisafyre
date: Mar. 31st, 2002 11:11 pm (UTC)
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i agree, amazing poem. and yes, it was an interesting night.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Mar. 31st, 2002 11:23 pm (UTC)
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it was written for someone special, with someone in mind. freeverse.

i am glad you like it.

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from: ex_neko
date: Apr. 1st, 2002 02:34 pm (UTC)
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as it blossomed it made me smile.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Apr. 1st, 2002 06:24 pm (UTC)
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*grin*

smiles are good.

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laur

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from: laurlaur182
date: Apr. 1st, 2002 05:47 am (UTC)
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OMG...that is all..

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Apr. 1st, 2002 07:08 am (UTC)
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like it?

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laur

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from: laurlaur182
date: Apr. 1st, 2002 03:19 pm (UTC)
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i loved it...

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Apr. 1st, 2002 06:25 pm (UTC)
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*smiles* yay!

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less than

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from: reasonsunknown
date: Apr. 1st, 2002 04:23 pm (UTC)
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crying

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Apr. 1st, 2002 06:26 pm (UTC)
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why would you cry silly?

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less than

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from: reasonsunknown
date: Apr. 1st, 2002 08:23 pm (UTC)
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it was so beautiful. and i want it. but i'm so far away from it. and kristen, my bestest friend i think, online made up a scenario for me with this boy i adore because i'm i sensuality addict. and it eerily similar to that. and because i hope that there are more boys like you. who know why they want what they want. and who want to give. connect. and i really feel like i'm talking/typing too much. end.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Apr. 1st, 2002 10:07 pm (UTC)
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i just wish the person that is was written about actually wanted it to occur.

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less than

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from: reasonsunknown
date: Apr. 2nd, 2002 10:13 am (UTC)
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: (

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Apr. 2nd, 2002 01:53 pm (UTC)
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yeah.

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from: sweetaugust
date: Apr. 1st, 2002 06:20 pm (UTC)
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your endings always get me.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Apr. 1st, 2002 06:26 pm (UTC)
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in a bad or a good way?

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sky's on fire again

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from: lil_web
date: Apr. 1st, 2002 11:09 pm (UTC)
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this is interesting. it is out of the norm from most of your poetry. not the style, but the subject.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Apr. 2nd, 2002 12:02 am (UTC)
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not really. read more of my poetry at http://haveheart.com/poetry/

the theme of sex/making love/whatever pops up in a lot of them, just not always explicit.

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Heather

ahhhhh ya

from: bombquita
date: Apr. 3rd, 2002 03:30 pm (UTC)
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damn you make me so horny

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Tim

Re: ahhhhh ya

from: visions
date: Apr. 3rd, 2002 04:40 pm (UTC)
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too bad you dont live here then. it had no effect on the person it was written for.

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jaded

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from: flown
date: Apr. 4th, 2002 10:18 am (UTC)
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are you serious?

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Tim

Re: ahhhhh ya

from: visions
date: Apr. 4th, 2002 10:24 am (UTC)
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yep. the subject matter didnt interest her.

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jaded

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from: flown
date: Apr. 4th, 2002 10:55 am (UTC)
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whether or not the subject matter is interesting, there's a certain level of appreciation someone should have for something that is written with them in mind. *spanks her* tsktsk.

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Tim

Re: ahhhhh ya

from: visions
date: Apr. 4th, 2002 10:59 am (UTC)
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not everyone is "considerate and appreciative"

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Heather

Re: ahhhhh ya

from: bombquita
date: Apr. 5th, 2002 02:32 pm (UTC)
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well maybe its all for the better than...because if some guy dedicated a poem like the one you wrote to me......ohh wow

you'll meet someone someday and they'll appricate that you even sat down and dedicated the time to write something that came from your heart ya know :)

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Tim

Re: ahhhhh ya

from: visions
date: Apr. 5th, 2002 03:19 pm (UTC)
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you deserve a poem like that. :)

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Heather

Re: ahhhhh ya

from: bombquita
date: Apr. 5th, 2002 03:30 pm (UTC)
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maybe..just maybe
most people don't have the skills to write such poetic stuff like you do.....

you've definatly have got a good talent..just make sure that a woman's deserving of it ya know :)

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Tim

Re: ahhhhh ya

from: visions
date: Apr. 5th, 2002 03:35 pm (UTC)
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anyone that i care about is deserving of receiving a poem from me. the subject matter is up to determination though. however, i do tend to only write poems about people that i am dating... i rarely write poems actually FOR someone.

some people appreciate it, others don't. to each their own i guess.

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Heather

Re: ahhhhh ya

from: bombquita
date: Apr. 8th, 2002 02:22 pm (UTC)
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it was a beautiful poem tho...

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My plastic hair is furious!

wow

from: koritsimou
date: Apr. 5th, 2002 09:00 am (UTC)
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my goodness. I got a very *ahem* clear image from that. Lovely. Rarely do men publicly speak with such reverence about that.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Apr. 5th, 2002 09:08 am (UTC)
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an *ahem* clear image is a good thing right? :-)

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My plastic hair is furious!

Re: wow

from: koritsimou
date: Apr. 5th, 2002 08:16 pm (UTC)
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;) oh indeed. very good. It was quite sexy. You've got a flair for it.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Apr. 6th, 2002 02:03 am (UTC)
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:-p

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