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Mar. 24th, 2002 | 12:37 pm

i walk with no light
no eyes with which to see
stumbling forward
falling to my knees

i speak with no voice
heard with no sound
babbling about nothing
hiding the frown

i plee for help
no one comes
collapsing, i fall
face to the mud

i writhe in pain
hoping for help
crying inside
lost and left out

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Tony

poem and boxers

from: sylvaris
date: Mar. 24th, 2002 07:02 pm (UTC)
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like both the poem and those boxers you're wearing in the current picture....
love and blessings
Sylvaris

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Tim

Re: poem and boxers

from: visions
date: Mar. 25th, 2002 12:08 am (UTC)
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danke.

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DeprivedInVisions

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from: dicevinightmare
date: Mar. 27th, 2002 05:44 pm (UTC)
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thats a really good poem...is it ok that i added you to my friends list?
+Nicole+

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Mar. 27th, 2002 08:17 pm (UTC)
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thanks and by all means.

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Amazing

from: rutalkin2me704
date: Mar. 31st, 2002 08:11 pm (UTC)
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A moment in life when you stumble across something that makes the breath stop in your throat...just for that brief moment...you feel that much less alone.

I tip my hat to you dear Sir! :)

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Tim

Re: Amazing

from: visions
date: Mar. 31st, 2002 08:19 pm (UTC)
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thanks, i am glad you liked it.

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Re: Amazing

from: rutalkin2me704
date: Mar. 31st, 2002 08:31 pm (UTC)
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Like is a small understatement.....but you're welcome just the same! :P

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