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Mar. 20th, 2002 | 03:19 am

i ask that
once you close
your eyes will sleep

i beg for
you to stand
tall above it all

i need it
to be what we want to be
holding our hearts in hand
wearing our shame
as a pin on our sleeve

i want you
to explain why
when tears fall for no reason
just the reason why.

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chrissy

AWwW

from: chrissystraka
date: Mar. 20th, 2002 05:05 am (UTC)
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That was a nice poem :)

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Tim

Re: AWwW

from: visions
date: Mar. 20th, 2002 11:52 am (UTC)
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thanks.

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jenne

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from: hellloitslate
date: Mar. 20th, 2002 10:37 am (UTC)
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beautiful.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Mar. 20th, 2002 11:52 am (UTC)
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the flow is unique.

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from: sigmasarah
date: Mar. 20th, 2002 08:37 pm (UTC)
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Awwww! I like your poetry-I'm a sucker for poetry written by guys, especially since it seems to be so rare! :)
Hope you've cheered up. Send me an IM if you wanna talk!
Later
Sarah

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Mar. 20th, 2002 11:02 pm (UTC)
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thanks sweetie. when you coming back to chambana?

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from: sigmasarah
date: Mar. 21st, 2002 09:08 am (UTC)
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Sometime Sunday afternoon! I'll be online there whenever I get my ethernet straightened out.
Sarah

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