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Jan. 12th, 2002 | 04:50 pm

i know you more than you think i do
i feel the breath enter your lungs, just like you
i know the pain, yes.. i do
i feel your tears stream down your face, just like you.
i know you more than you think i do.

i feel pain when you are not here
i feel happy when you are near
why is it like that you say?
why is it that you push me away?

i am a man
strong willed.
i am a person
mind, body and soul.
but i have been hurt
way too much before.

i want to hold you
i want to be held
not just by arms as you might think
i want your heart to cradle mine
i want to let go and slowly sink

you have more control than you think you do
i gave it to you
be gentle though
be careful
you have more control than you think you do.
i am fragile.
more fragile than you.

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from: boxual
date: Jan. 13th, 2002 12:41 am (UTC)
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hey, livejournal is confusing me, if ya get a chance can ya please help me out? My screen name is millavitch, so yeah.

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Erin

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from: luxurious
date: Jan. 14th, 2002 02:25 am (UTC)
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*tear* Beautiful. Amazing. Speechless.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jan. 14th, 2002 06:26 am (UTC)
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i'm glad you liked it.

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Ling

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from: kyokoyume
date: Jan. 15th, 2002 05:46 pm (UTC)
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Truly a beautiful poem. I wish I could write poems like you do. It's not only amazing but very insperational.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Jan. 15th, 2002 05:58 pm (UTC)
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thanks. i just write what comes to my mind. nothing all that thought out. :)

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from: feature980
date: Jan. 18th, 2002 05:10 am (UTC)
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Your poetry is vague, unfocused and self-indulgent.

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