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Dec. 16th, 2001 | 12:48 pm

to walk alone with love in ones heart
to be pierced with feelings and not know where to start
to hide from the sun
and seek the moon
to walk with fingers slid gently through

to not hide
your soul
your heart
yourself

to raise
your head
your glance
to have that second chance

pray
pray to your god
pray to yourself
pray
for another day.

in that day
you will see
things will make sense
your worries will be free.

take that chance
its worth the try
dont worry about days past
just worry about making every moment last.

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diva star

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from: discoragasm
date: Dec. 16th, 2001 09:41 pm (UTC)
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nice piece of work.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Dec. 17th, 2001 12:31 am (UTC)
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thanks. i wrote it based on my percieved feelings that someone else might be having.

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diva star

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from: discoragasm
date: Dec. 17th, 2001 12:45 am (UTC)
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i can admire someone that can put their feelins down on paper and or the net. writing sometimes helps to express things that we couldnt say.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Dec. 19th, 2001 08:05 pm (UTC)
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yes, it can be very hard at times.. but its a good outlet. :)

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diva star

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from: discoragasm
date: Dec. 19th, 2001 08:23 pm (UTC)
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I should know...that what's i'm doing in school...playwriting!

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Dec. 19th, 2001 08:31 pm (UTC)
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hehe. i am a "computer person" although i dont really play that roll. :-P

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from: love_no_evil
date: Dec. 17th, 2001 10:23 am (UTC)
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very beautiful....very true....
:)

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Dec. 19th, 2001 08:05 pm (UTC)
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thanks

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from: xxx_x
date: Dec. 19th, 2001 02:49 pm (UTC)
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i was snooping through LJs and found yours and wow.. i love the way you write. :) so i added you as a friend.. hope ya don't mind.

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Dec. 19th, 2001 08:11 pm (UTC)
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hehe.. no, i dont mind at all.. did you check out my webpage as well?

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from: xxx_x
date: Dec. 19th, 2001 09:53 pm (UTC)
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i haven't check yet, but i'm planning on it. :)

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Dec. 19th, 2001 10:29 pm (UTC)
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let me know what you think when you do.

i added you to my buddy list on AIM... msg me there sometime.

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from: xxx_x
date: Dec. 20th, 2001 05:26 pm (UTC)
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i tried posting this in your gb but i dun think it worked soooo.... i'm posting it here. :)

-gives ya 2 thumbs up- you've done a wonderful job with all this. -smiles- the layout is clean, very well put together, and you've got a lot of good content. you express yourself well. it's refreshing to see in a world of clones and sheep. -laffs-

take care, talk to ya on AIM. :)

taryn*~

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Tim

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from: visions
date: Dec. 20th, 2001 06:21 pm (UTC)
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thanks

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