?

Log in

No account? Create an account

(no subject)

« previous entry | next entry »
Jul. 4th, 2001 | 11:38 pm

if you close your eyes and look into the sky
if you close your eyes and let the tears fall
if you close your eyes and cry to the gods
if you take my heart and cast it to the ground
if you take my hand and slowly slide it to your face
if you let me feel your tears, i will wipe them away

if you cast me a glance
stare into my eyes
hold my hand
take a chance

if you give me your heart
if you take things slowly and let us get off to a good start
if you let me, i will do my part

here i stand
heart in hand
clenching into the air
standing still
standing here

Link | Leave a comment | Share

Comments {7}

(no subject)

from: udp
date: Jul. 4th, 2001 11:22 pm (UTC)
Link

Prozac, anyone?

Reply | Thread

Tim

(no subject)

from: visions
date: Jul. 4th, 2001 11:28 pm (UTC)
Link

im not depressed at all.
you should know better than that.

Reply | Parent | Thread

Dr. Strangelove

(no subject)

from: jobe
date: Jul. 5th, 2001 06:16 am (UTC)
Link

SSRI's are baaad, mmmmmkay.

Reply | Parent | Thread

Sea

(no subject)

from: lessthanjunk
date: Jul. 4th, 2001 11:36 pm (UTC)
Link

depression is not what i thought of at all.....

sounds more like realization

Reply | Thread

Tim

(no subject)

from: visions
date: Jul. 4th, 2001 11:41 pm (UTC)
Link

what do you think i was realizing?

Reply | Parent | Thread

Sea

(no subject)

from: lessthanjunk
date: Jul. 5th, 2001 11:43 am (UTC)
Link

the fact that the world is a beautiful place and you are a strong yet vulnerable part of it.

you want to give your all to someone and let that someone know that you will do your best as a person to be there for them and to give them all you are capable of giving.

this 'someone' is probabaly a person...but it could be something much, much larger than that........

"you" could definatly represent a feeling or a situation....

"if you give me your heart
if you take things slowly and let us get off to a good start
if you let me, i will do my part" -

when I read this the first thought that comes to my head is automacticaly the thought of another person, a mate if you will, but it could be much larger than that easily......

The lack of capitals lessens the chance that it is of a religious meaning......

sorry for my un-invited once over analyzation.

Reply | Parent | Thread

Tim

(no subject)

from: visions
date: Jul. 5th, 2001 03:55 pm (UTC)
Link

not bad.

i am always interested in what people think. :)

Reply | Parent | Thread